Reviews for The Vampire in the Basement
Carole44 chapter 23 . 2/1
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Carole44 chapter 4 . 1/31
Heartwrenching...
MusicToSleepTo chapter 32 . 1/24
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yourekillingmesmalls chapter 32 . 1/18
Great story! Love the mystery, every character brings something to the plot. Took mr a while but totally worth it.
Melasaurus chapter 32 . 1/17
This is a decent read and has the reviews to prove it. Thanks to the author for taking the time to write and post it. The descriptions and the mystery keep one reading.

Some small things: The explanation for Bella needing to go in that basement in the first place was rough. Bella isn't someone who would be willing to violate the Cullens privacy in the way she did here. Even being worried about her friend, I can't see her going over and looking around without permission.

The 90 years in captivity was something that needed to be overlooked and for several reasons. It's said that one week in the hole is an eternity for a prisoner, I can't imagine how bad off one might be after 10 years straight of zero contact from another being. I don't think any being would get through this without becoming permanently catatonic. Not even a Bella/Edward love would fix that. Also, I get one mad scientist being evil enough carry this out, but with a span of 90 years this would be several generations of people willing to break several laws in pursuit of their dastardly plans.

All that aside, this was a good read. The explanations of Alice's visions were fabulous. Carlisle's thoughts and actions were on point with canon. I have yet to see any other writer do such a wonderful job matching the characters in their fan fiction to those in the original saga.
Kasey Elizabeth chapter 32 . 1/7
This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Wow.

The concept was so brilliant, and I was restless until I finished the story. I couldn't get away. I loved Edward in this so, so much. Thank you for this work of art.
DalekQueen7 chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
Bella is so random. :) This is hilarious.
kinnik chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Simply brilliant concept. I don't if you're still writing or if you will receive this, but I wanted to leave a review anyway. Loving it already! On to the next chapter!
HisLove chapter 17 . 10/11/2015
Edward and Bella at the "party" was simply beautiful.
Marlene3658 chapter 32 . 10/10/2015
I love this story! Old story's are really good
qhrciskrpc chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
If you were elated by reviews when you were writing this, you must be STOKED now...
Vulca chapter 22 . 10/6/2015
Whoa... That was one sad heartbreaking scene. Poor edward.
Vulca chapter 20 . 10/6/2015
The best chapter of the story. Until the next :D
Vulca chapter 13 . 10/5/2015
That last sentence blew me away. Phew...
Vulca chapter 12 . 10/5/2015
Loved it. Jst loved it. That last bit "dnt leave me" almst made me cry :')
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