Good God, that broke my heart a little. What a painful story. I can not wait for more. I feel like I NEED to know what happened to Edward. Poor poor Edward. Poor poor Bella.

Wow, my heart breaks for Edward and I hope Bella can help him. The way you portray the emotions in this story is truly amazing. This story is really well written and I cannot wait to see how it continues. I am very intrigued to know what is going to happen next!

My heart just broke. Why, oh why must you do this to yourself, Edward? And poor Bella, trying to fight against something way beyond her. I can't even begin to comprehend how devastated she must feel right now. I just hope she'll eventually understand that at this moment, Edward is just a shell of himself. A scared, broken shell. Ah Michellephants, you'll be the death of me. I still don't know how you managed to actually get peppy-&-always-cheery me, to read an angsty fic & actually like it. Trust me, I've tried before and it wasn't pretty. But here I am, reading & actually enjoying the hurt & angst. What have you done? I feel like such a masochistic. It must be your writing style! Lately, I've been really hard to please in the whole writing thing. I find myself scoffing at what used to be my favorite part of a book or story. I have to say, your writing style is amazing. I mean, you don't use super huge words that no one understands and yet, you still manage to make it seems elegant & mature. Sadden as I may be, I find myself very curious as to what is going on in our dear Edward's mind. And so I wonder, would it be possible to someday get some insight of his thoughts? I'd be very grateful.

I hope you have a lovely day,

Gabby

WOW! i'm loving this fic so so much right now! it's so original and well written! and i just LOVE IT!

Bella is amazing here! she's strong and funny and stubborn!

and my heart is breaking with Bella¡s with poor Edward :( what the hell happened to him? :(

I can't wait to read more! Hope you can update SOON! :D

Perfectly written. The emotion in the story is palpable. You write with such lushness and description. I really love this story and can't WAIT to read more.

Sque! Update! I am totally enthralled by this story. I love that Edward no longer trusts her at the end of the chapter. I didn't expect that. You are really good at describing the way she feels about him, and the way you portray him is heartbreaking. I'm glad this story is unfolding slowly as well. (That's not to say updates shouldn't be posted as rapidly as possible!) Also, I really appreciate your proper use of spelling and punctuation.

I'm very intrigued. I can't wait to find out more and see what Carlisle discovers if/when he managed to get a good look at Edward's injuries.

I came over here from the WA forum- I loved your banner! This story is so intriguing...I am gonna stick with it and read the whole thing! Thank You!

I usually don't go for this type of fic but your really have me intrigued and I can't wait to read more. Thanks! :)

Very good chapter! Can't wait to read more. :)

I've read so many "introductions" of Bella and Edward that I can't count or even remember. They usually have them both being gaga over each other and the spark of electricity. Your introduction scene was the powerful emotionally that I've ever read, and so beautiful, no less fated than canon.

I like this setup. Different and interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!

I... Wow... Do you know how hard you made it for me to review? I feel like Bella approaching Edward: Hesitant, yet determined. I have to admit, I'm not usually big on Dark theme fics, but ever since I read the description for this story, I haven't managed to look away. You got me analyzing, questioning & reanalyzing ever single detail, encounter, reaction that has taken place, and I'm psyched to see where this story is going. There's this strange pull I feel towards the plot that's indescribable. I mean, Edward, usually Mr. Confidence, in fetal position, scared and lost? I have never read anything like it. He seems so fragile and vulnerable, like a little kid who's innocence was stolen away. I want you to know that no matter where you intend to take this story, I'll come along for the ride. I hope the next chapter is coming along nicely, because I'll be counting down the seconds before I get to re-plung myself in this cynical, Yet captivating world. Enjoy your day!

:O Wow. This is AMAZING. Honestly, it's so cool!

Keep going I love it