Really good story so far - imaginative while keeping with canon couplings and personalities. I am very curious to know why Edward is not attacking Bella and I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!

Very interesting so far, am quite curious as to Edward's story. I first saw this on twilighted, but for some reason it won't let me read it, so I am glad you posted it here

Okay, this story should have so much more than just 4 reviews. I saw it on and I loved it, but didn't review because twilighted hates me or something, I just can't log in. I like where it's heading, and I can't wait for more.

I really liked this! I loved your descriptions of all his growling. ) Can't wait to see what happened to poor Edward and how Bella is going to help him. Please keep writing!

oh. my. god. this is totally awsome. the vampire is like an injured puppy. its too cute. the vampire is edward right? but if edward didn't introduce bella into the vampire world, how did she find out? you should put that later in your story. HURRY KEEP WRITING! PLEASE *puppy faced pout*

I really like this so far! I especially like the fact that Bella knows the Cullens are vamps - the Buffy part towards the end was hysterical. Keep up the great writing, this seems very original so far! Congrats on posting your first fanfiction. :)

Sam

Oh, I'm liking where this is going. Can't wait for the next update ]

Yay! First review XD