Reviews for Unwell
kids at play chapter 8 . 9/24/2009
It's good. I would love longer chapters, though.


I can't wait for the next update!
hayley chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
hey love the first chapter
Emmy chapter 8 . 7/5/2009
rae rae its emma, i couldnt be bothered to sign in...

this is really good,, i want more! *cracks the whip*

much love x
Team Edward Rocks chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
sara chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
i love your story its awesome!

the whole heart break idea is perfect.

gabriel is really cute, he is so sweet.
Ezmarelda Elizabeth MacKlintof chapter 8 . 6/13/2009
an interesting story, would like to read more. cant wait for the next chapter
chele the original chapter 8 . 6/12/2009
good chapter very dramatic with Edward. I don't like the idea of Bella being chummy with another dude though.:)
ShooNiNahKiyoko chapter 8 . 6/12/2009
i like this gabriel person he's starting to grow on me aswell x
caww chapter 8 . 6/12/2009
I'd say Angela's plan worked.

Did her plan work too well?

Will Bella still see Carlisle? Did Edward and Carlisle think of new plans to help Bella after she left the office?

Nice that Gabriel is there so Bella can be herself, and get an ego boost.

Are you going to share what was in the note?

chele the original chapter 7 . 6/12/2009
i have really enjoyed your story so far please continue..:)
caww chapter 7 . 6/10/2009
Awe Gabriel seems rather wonderful...and I'm sure Edward will be jealous if he sees Gabriel with Bella and Angela.

Very interesting.

ritarocks chapter 7 . 6/10/2009
not bad...i miss edward! but gabriel sounds hot...what he's james! haha never woulda guessed!
caww chapter 6 . 6/9/2009
Too bad she thinks Carlisle isn't professional.

I hope she still goes for therapy with him?

..and then find out that Carlisle didn't know Edward was the same Edward that she was talking about...

Interesting to meet Angela's brother. How old is he? I'm curious why Angela thinks Bella will be entertaining to Gabriel?

You're full of surprises...and having Edward's family sort of in different ways all associated with Bella's life...I hope with the help of Angela she sees that it's Fate and not a curse?

ritarocks chapter 5 . 6/8/2009
omg so good! continue please
caww chapter 5 . 6/7/2009
To re-live memories of hope. Must be really difficult. What a cliffy? giggle.

oh, hurry write more-I so want to read what happens he sees Bella! Will he feel good to see Bella?..and Bella to see him?

can't wait!

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