Reviews for On the Fringe
C.H.W.13 chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
OMG OMG. Poor Nicky:( Just realized this was done nearly 3 years ago. WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO YOU? YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED THE STORY YET! Please update the story. I LOVE IT!
Eirien Nimrodel-herves vuin chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
Whoa...didn't see that coming...

Interesting plot...I'm hooked all over again, please post more soon!
snowwhitecsi chapter 3 . 3/16/2009
Hope all is well with you. Eagerly awaiting new chapters.
weimfriend chapter 3 . 3/10/2009

So far so good, its really interesting, poor Nick what they did to him, hopefully we will find out soon, I hope that nick will be back to himself by the time this is over
SuzSeb chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
Well, it's different. But I'm enjoying it. I can't wait to see where you're headed.
snowwhitecsi chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
Poor Nick being used for testing. He has to come out of this ok? I like the way he talks to his doctors like they are the testers when he scared or agitated.
NickyFan chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
Great, a new chapter from my favourite author for my favourite story:D I was so waiting for that:)

First of all I wasn't thinking that you're getting into Alien-Stuff with your writing... I was just a little confused cuz I never heard of experiments like that before... and cuz you really wrote in riddles with your last author's note... just to keep us entertained and to show us your "evil grinning" mean side;) Leaving us hanging like that... that was really, really mean;) It nearly drove me to write another message to you and begging for a new hint...

...And you know what? This chapter wasn't any better, it just made things worse... so you cn be sure I'm begging this time;) But it was great to read a bit more about what the evil people did to Nick... even if it makes me so angry... How could people destroy one persons life just like that?

Will they ever be able to get Nick's life on the right way again? There're so many people out there to harm our Texan...The proplems Nick had before were all fixable if they just give all their best to get the people who did all that shit to him but now it's a different story...

This problem is so much more serious... no one knows if the Dr's will be able to help our Texan to be normal again... This is so mean...

Even if they are there for him they maybe can't give him his old life back... this is just sad and so frustrating...

Dr Kasey, Dr Mason, Dr Hold and Dr Simons are all great docs but this case is new for all of them... maybe Dr Simons knows a little bit more then the others but he also seems to be unsure of what to do and the risks of doing anything...

The whole thing shows Nick's behaviour since his return in a complete different light... he's happy okay but that is just because he underwent some very evil kind of brain washing and got this insertion... he loves Nikki, he did it before he was taken too but what now? Of course Nikki asks herself now if Nick's feelings are real now or if he just needed her to get pregnant. That sounds maybe harsh, cuz Nick really can't help himself cuz he can't think any longer like he did before he was taken...

Nikki must feel so bad... she knows that Nicky is just a victim and she's scared cuz she don't know how to deal with the fact that Nick had the instruction to get her pregnant... that sounds like everything that happened last night happened just because of that and not because Nicky really loves her...

Now they need Nick to agree to Hospital treatment... that should be as easy as making the sun shine 24 hours streight...

The question here is: How is Nick's insertion effecting his rational thinking? Will the others be able to convince him that he need to comply to get his old life back? In his state he don't even thinks that there is something wrong with him and I'm sure if they would treat him in the hospital he would feel very bad cuz the insertion will give him some signal... That will be bone-hard work for them...

The only thing they can maybe use for their advantage is the thing that Nicky never would want to hurt Nikki or his child... maybe that would make him comply... maybe they just need to make sure that he's a big risk for her and their child in the state he is in now... or this is going to be so mean, I can feel it...

Sometimes I really wish that I could read your mind, you know... this is really killing me, I want to know what happens next...

Please update soon, I need to know what's going to happen next...

Thank you for that great chapter:) This long review and possible future messages from me should show you that I'm addicted and that I'm hanging on every word you write, like always:) Great work, really:D
ctess chapter 3 . 3/4/2009
Great chapter! This is not a typical drama story and I am liking it!

Update soon.
stokesgirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
You did very well for your first sex chapter. That was hot!

I'm sure that Texan was horny waiting all those months.

Good job!
NickyFan chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
Oh... what are you going to do now to our Texan? Why shouldn't he want Nikki to be pregnant with his baby?

You know I remember a chapter where I was wondering why Charlie wanted that much that Nick remembers Nikki but can forget about all the other good things in his life... of course he wanted Nick to be happy but why was Nikki the only good thing that he wanted Nick to remember the most? I found it odd in this chapter but I wasn't really thinking much about it but now... what did they plan with Nick?

Hopefully this won't get too supernatural... you know I'm not that into Aliens;) But I'm sure that there is a rational answer to all of that..., isn't it? Hopefully they can figure it out soon... I just want Nicky to be safe again... or at least I really want that they know what's going on with him, so they can try to help him. This not knowing what they're dealing with is really killing me...

It was funny to read about that Nicky and Nikki got disturbed by Catherine, Warrick and Grissom:) Of course Catherine was worried about our Cowboy:D Now he sees where it ends when he's simply too busy calling his "older sister" when he should do it:)

Nick's meeting with Dr Kasey was concerning... He still can't remember dates and that nearly half a year after the accident and then there is the hypnotic thing... The insertion seems to block his bad memories... so that he simply can't remember... and he also seems to have forgotten that John is his father and not his brother or he simply don't want to see it that way...

Dr Kasey is right, Nick needs to be in a hospital cuz the things that happened to him weren't pretty and obviously Nick isn't as healthy as he thinks he is... But how will they be able to get him back in there... I'm not sure if they could manage that... Nick is too stubborn for that... the only one who can maybe talk sense into him is Nikki but in that point I don't think that she'll be able to help...

So they will maybe only be able to watch every step of Nick and therefore they need to bring Nick to the point that he don't goes on his honeymoon with Nikki and that would be nearly as difficult as bringing him back in the hospital... They've alot of work to do... maybe Dr Mason finds out more about Nick's insertion... I really hope so...

I can't wait for more, so please don't let me waiting for too long, you know I hate that;)

Great chapter, thank you so much:)
NickyFan chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
So weekend is over and now I can review the first chapters of your new story, which isn't really a new story:)

You know I woke up early last Friday, just to take a look if you posted a chapter of your new story and I was lucky that I could copy it before I drove home:) So I read it this weekend and this was good cuz so I had time to think about it a bit more before I write a review:)

As you wrote that "On The Fringe" should be a story with mature material I wasn't really sure what to think about it but I followed you and so I read it:)

And what should I say? Congratulations:D Great job, really:) I enjoyed reading it:) Nick really loves Nikki and of course he wanted her, he was waiting so long for that:)

I'm sure he never had a relationship with someone after Nikki broke up with him the first time... he must have been so lonely:( And then the accident and all the shit with Rebecca, the judge and his parents and last but not least the institution where they changed him completely... He really needed what Nikki gave him and I really understand that he couldn't wait any longer to get it:) He's just a man (The sexiest one alive;) )

Great that you gave our Texan a little fun and happiness:D I'm sure you've some serious ideas in your head what you're going to do to him... and I'm sure that his happiness won't last too long...

So this chapter was a great start for going into the mysterious world you're trying to write now... what about the insertion? Is it dangerous for Nicky and Nikki? What'll happen with our Nicky?

Keep it going, I'll be there to read it:)

Great job and thank you for this chapter:) Now I've another one left, maybe I'll get some answers but like I know you, you'll amke sure that we don't get too much, huh?
snowwhitecsi chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
Great start. Keep updates coming. Are we thinking something "strange" will become of Nick and Nicole's baby?
Eirien Nimrodel-herves vuin chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
O...good beginning...ok, I'm hooked.

More please! I really liked the first chapter *whew, hot damn!*
SuzSeb chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
Well, there are still huge gaps that we and the team don't know. But we know it wasn't all a good experience. At least Nick has Nikki. But since that appears to be what Charlie wanted for him, is it really a good thing?

Can't wait for what you torture him with next! :)
ctess chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Nicky got some lovin!

Can't wait to read more.

Will we find out you Charlie and Dr. Tam are? Will he eventually remember all of the bad memories? Who wanted those memories erased?

Update soon..
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