Reviews for The Price
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/23
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
kaos2405 chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Ok u totally shocked me and made me love it
Kajune chapter 1 . 6/23/2015

You wrote a story like this, about Henry fighting for Elizabeth, instead of leaving her to suffer. You wrote it so well. Though poor Mary. I'm glad for More though, but the disgrace he would feel. X(

This was good, very good, a fun thing to read.
Though I'm not sure, his vision would come true. It was what Elizabeth suffered through that turned her into the Virgin Queen. Though I hope she does anyway, but wow, things would be so different. *jaw-drop*

Thank you, for writing~
Queen Daphne Tudor chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
Wow. Just wow.
with chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
you should make a second story of mary she dies and she has to decide to become a angle or demon she choose to become a demon then finds out what her father did then sets out to destroy Elizabeth and anne
verity-moonprincess01 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Something magnificent... I love that it is long and not a short story. I am also glad that you let Anne live.
MADStar529 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Great story! Loved it!
S.L. Cooper chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Good story. :)
CrystalEarth chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
yuiop chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That was so good. I got misty eyed at the end.
Nessiexo chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
How utterly perfect. I can't say more than that, because this was indescribable. Wow. I love how he calls her Gloriana, how how he looks at Elizabeth instead of Anne, how he get rid of any threats for his Gloriana... ugh! This was too perfect!
pepperjill chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
wow. stunning. amazing what-if fic... It has occured to me that the astrologers who promised all signs pointed to a strong prince before Elizabeth's birth were not mistaken, she was princely and strong.
SpriteBlue chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
That was cool and beautiful :)
Tudor at heart chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I would've loved to see you turn this into a full story .
Tera Earth chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I have to say this story was both vaguely disturbing and kinda cool. I mean on the one hand, you have Henry actually acknowledging that a daughter can be a viable and powerful ruler in her own right. On the other hand, killing off mary, making sure all of Anne's future children are miscaried. I give him point for staying with Anne and being supportive after her first miscariage, but if his wife and daughter ever really knew how far he went to see this vision come to pass...chilling. How willing he was to do anything to make sure that Elizabeth became the Gloriana he saw. Thats what chills me. The lengths he went through.

On the other hand, I am really happy to see him be proud of Elizabeth. I always wondered what he would have thought of her reign. How even today, we still remember the Virgin Queen and what she did for her country. I mean for crying out loud, she basically was the Golden Age of England. Not too many rulers have periods of history named after them.

Again, great but very disturbing story.
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