Reviews for Do This With Me
This Charade chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
This story was creepy good. I wanted to reach in and punch Xehanort in the face. I loved the characterization and the choice to stay inside Braig/Xigbar's head. My favorite line was "what seemed a mish-mash of a castle forged from forgotten memories and lost dreams..." Haunting, really. My one tiny critique (because that's how writers help each other) is that there were parts where I think you used the name Braig to much, especially in Xehanort's speech. It made it sound a little too unnatural.

Excellent job.