Reviews for Pretense
Guest chapter 10 . 3/27
Why did you stop writing SasuHina stories? This was utterly and totally awesome. So many emotions, so much depth (especially the love scene, that was INTENSE!).

Could I convince you to write a new SasuHina fic? I adore how much effort you put into conveying their feelings, it truly is spectacular to read. I could almost taste their longing and passion.
Heise chapter 10 . 12/24/2016
I'm super happy that you finished this, and I'm happy that they're together. I hope Hanabi and Neji worked things out back in the clan, though. And hopefully Sakura worked out whatever inner feelings eventually. Sasuke and Hinata deserve happiness.
hime23 chapter 10 . 5/10/2016
como posso descrever oque cinti ao ler esse fanfic eu amei ele foi sofrido sombrio lindo calmo amoer lento muito bom
beanche chapter 10 . 11/18/2015
Beautiful story. It was well-written and realistic. The emotions in this story felt very relatable. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Hinasa chapter 10 . 10/11/2015
Wonderful story,
downtomars chapter 9 . 7/13/2015
Update soon!
ravenkel2161 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
YES! I found it. I read this like two years ago before I had an account. Now I found it again! Yes!
Myreally chapter 10 . 7/27/2014
I believe this story is one of the very few genuine Hinata/Sasuke stories. The emotions are so real and relatable. It's amazing!
Yudoku Kabe-no-Hana chapter 10 . 5/23/2014
My goodness. I've never read a fic in which Naruto was dead, for some reason it always made me uncomfortable even with that being said I absolutely ADORED this story. It was written beautifully as well. Your writing style is detailed but you also get to the point so that the reader isn't bored with the words. I love the interaction between Neji and Sasuke, they're so similar that it makes them hate each other, it's perfect! I think this was all in all a great story, I'm glad I got to read it in one shot too instead of painstakingly waiting for updates! I hope you write more SasuHina stories soon!
stoic-idle chapter 10 . 12/9/2013
stoic-idle chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
awesome chapter yet again.. and i cracked up when i read your AN.. good shit
stoic-idle chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
Your sasuke is alguds :) i like the way you write him. awesome chapter.
stoic-idle chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
first chapter and im hooked :) awesome man, cant wait to read the next one
Kibachow chapter 10 . 9/14/2013
I love this story. It was so good. I wish there was more.
aurora0914 chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
THat was soooo cute, but angsty! I always knew that Neji was in love with Hinata... but this was awesome! I lovelovelove LOVED it! Make more SasuHina!
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