Reviews for Impa's Untold Story
ZeroWolfWriter chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Wow...

I've noticed some things though, it's 'through' not 'thru'.

And Link has blue eyes in the game.

Other than that, it was good.
ch-ch-chelsea chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
good! but..two things bother me...

1. Why would Impa's horse be named "Shadow", its a white horse...

2. Link's eyes are "blue" not "brown".

Rather than that, I liked it, it really sounded like you were Impa!
von chapter 1 . 9/2/2000
interesting concept, but Link's eyes are like, a turquoise blue, not brown. interesting story though...who the hell is jonathan? oh! it's her and link's son right? no offense, but with a mom and dad called zelda and link, 'jonathan' doesn't sound right... well written.
Sita chapter 1 . 8/28/2000
Awesome!now write a story about me,Sita Risika,'da last vampire.
MarinKoholint chapter 1 . 8/9/2000
Ok. Now this is just my opinion on the way Impa acts. I think she is a bit more serious. I mean 'I wanted to wring you little neck.' Come on! Impa is the sole protector of Zelda and who would say that to the future queen, eh? The end bit, sorta telling about her future and all. 'A hero like his father' Hmm . . wonder who that is? You are a Zelda Link person huh? I am a Marin Link person but for this game I like same as you. Write more stuff asap! And if I ever offend you, don't take it personally or seriously! I am a total nutcase! Besides, It is really late here!
StarDragon chapter 1 . 7/27/2000
Several words were misspelled (I supposed that they were typos) and you never spelled "thru" entirely through. Other than that, it was interesting.
o'.'o chapter 1 . 7/26/2000
Nice! Just 1 problem, spaces, use them wisely between pargraphs. It's a letter right? Not a poem. Also, I didn' think Zelda was following Link around as Shiek like a lost puppy. More like a stalker of somekind. Heh. Anyway, you're good at these POV fics that pinpoint a moment in the games history. Play the game again, find more of these pinpoint moments. Good ones...like what Link thought of this whole Shiek/Zelda fiasco. Hmm...I take it you're a Link x Zelda fan. (vo_O)