|Reviews for Emotions|
| TheVioletContradiction chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Sooooo good! I love this idea, I haven't found anything like it before. Very well written.
| BxCt chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
WOW! that was really good
| ForksintheRoad chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Loved it, and hope you are writing more. Alice and Jasper are favorites, and you have done a good job with their perspectives.
| Amy chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I always love a story from Jasper's point of view. Well written and in character. Good job
| Cullenela chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Impressive... maybe you could do Emmet too? I wonder how he went through all of it. Watching his brother suffer because his wife would not allow Edward to do what Edward thought would preserve his wife's life and wondering also, where he'd stand if it had been Rosalie instead.
Maybe, a little regret for the inability to give Rosalie a child and a bit of remorse for what he was... a vampire! Maybe some panic, doubt and confusion. He loves Bella... what if she could bring a little more pleasure to his wife? Emmet deep in thought would be fun especially since he never seemed to see anything seriously.
I hope its a good story idea. I think only you can write it. You've done excellently with Esme and Jasper so far. Kudos
| SignedSealedWritten chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This story was quite amazing, I got chills. I'd love to hear other's reactions as well, its a thought that never really occured to me, I guess, because it skipped right over to Jacob. I'd love to see Carlisle's reaction, and perhaps Alice's reaction, maybe Emmett's. Emmett would be an interesting one to write.
Anyway, great oneshot! I'll be looking forward to reading more from you. I love how the end centered around hope, and how they'll always have it. That was a good point.
| AnimegirlKiki chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
O, I likey! I love stories with moments like this from other's POVs. this is great so very Jasper! You're great when it comes to nailing the other's Povs. Lol. Nice. Lol, Kiki
| luinrina chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
I liked this one-shot a lot. It explains so well the missing part of what happened when Edward and Bella came back home. I also loved that you showed how much the emotional turmoil the Cullens were in affected Jasper, and that Alice lost her visions completely added nicely to his own turmoil.
| Blank chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
I loved it! I had always wanted to know what the others thought about Bella being pregnant. Great story.
| Wake-up Soon chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Aw, more than like, not quite love. That's awesome in my books tho ... lol. Cute. && a bit different, I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with a scene like this (set when it is, Jasper && Alice) before. Always good to read new ideas. x3
| jasper is all mine chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
u sould write more its a great fanfiction
| anonymous23.19 chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This is really really good.