Reviews for Awakened by Nightfall
Danibee chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Great Chapter of a story,:) keep writing x
ste11una chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
Where exactly is Lexia taking her?

Lol. Poor Cynthia.

She's so confused and annoyed. /

Hey, at least Lex was sort of nice.

I wonder what happened to the nereids...

And who this guy she thinks is hovering over her is.

I can't wait for your next chapter! XD
Forestwater chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
Great title and great chapter. Although you might get more reviews if you allowed anonymous reviews.

Anyway, I really like Lexia so far - she seems very interesting.
MilanRouge chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
So, this is a daughter of Selene right?
MilanRouge chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
Nice new chapter, i couldn't find that many spelling mistakes.

P.S I love the name Alana! Alana Celeste is probably what I am going to name my daughter.
ste11una chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Haha, interesting nereids. I find it only slightly strange that they didn't ask for her name.

And really, how DID she get there exactly?

Lol. I'm so confused.

But that's the fun of it, I guess!

This was a very awesome chapter!

I wonder what exactly is going on in the water.

And what happened to the sisters?

The canoe sounds very pretty, by the way! XD

I can't wait for your next chapter!

Please update soon!
Perchance - to - Dream - 12 chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
Yay! its gushing time! I LOve it it is so so so good no wait great lease update soon!
Forestwater chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
Ah, excellent! I was looking forward to this.

I like what you added to it that I hadn't seen before - the bit about the "high spirit" was especially good, and exactly what I meant about being poetic without going overboard. Ditto for the boat description, and I was impressed with how you linked it to her love of swimming.

I'm interested about Ella, because she seems more interesting than the other two. I hope we find out what her role is in the story; she seems kind of like the parent figure for her sisters.

The entire story seems great so far, and I can't wait to see how the half-bloods fit in!
MilanRouge chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
Ooh, nice and thanks for mentioning me! :D
ste11una chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
The part about the water kind of confused me.

Some things in the beginning was really confusing, but you are doing an excellent job for your first fanfic!

I really loved the image of her emerging from a rock. VERY cool. XD

I wonder what was in her dream? Are her dreams/nightmares going to be a regular part of this story?

Your character sounds beautiful and her thoughts sound about right.

This story is definitely amazing so far.

I can't wait to read more!

Please update soon!
ste11una chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
I don't know of this story, but I figured checking out your fanfic was the least I could do. ]

This is written very well.

The story seems awesome so far.

It's interesting, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it.

I wonder how involved Krotos will be in the story...?

And why the maiden will emerge when she does?

Hm...I can't wait to find out!

I hope you update soon! _
MilanRouge chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This was truly a great start and a wonderful and interesting idea.