|Reviews for Awakened by Nightfall|
| Danibee chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Great Chapter of a story,:) keep writing x
| ste11una chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
Where exactly is Lexia taking her?
Lol. Poor Cynthia.
She's so confused and annoyed. /
Hey, at least Lex was sort of nice.
I wonder what happened to the nereids...
And who this guy she thinks is hovering over her is.
I can't wait for your next chapter! XD
| Forestwater chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
Great title and great chapter. Although you might get more reviews if you allowed anonymous reviews.
Anyway, I really like Lexia so far - she seems very interesting.
| MilanRouge chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
So, this is a daughter of Selene right?
| MilanRouge chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
Nice new chapter, i couldn't find that many spelling mistakes.
P.S I love the name Alana! Alana Celeste is probably what I am going to name my daughter.
| ste11una chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Haha, interesting nereids. I find it only slightly strange that they didn't ask for her name.
And really, how DID she get there exactly?
Lol. I'm so confused.
But that's the fun of it, I guess!
This was a very awesome chapter!
I wonder what exactly is going on in the water.
And what happened to the sisters?
The canoe sounds very pretty, by the way! XD
I can't wait for your next chapter!
Please update soon!
| Perchance - to - Dream - 12 chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
Yay! its gushing time! I LOve it it is so so so good no wait great lease update soon!
| Forestwater chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
Ah, excellent! I was looking forward to this.
I like what you added to it that I hadn't seen before - the bit about the "high spirit" was especially good, and exactly what I meant about being poetic without going overboard. Ditto for the boat description, and I was impressed with how you linked it to her love of swimming.
I'm interested about Ella, because she seems more interesting than the other two. I hope we find out what her role is in the story; she seems kind of like the parent figure for her sisters.
The entire story seems great so far, and I can't wait to see how the half-bloods fit in!
| MilanRouge chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
Ooh, nice and thanks for mentioning me! :D
| ste11una chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
The part about the water kind of confused me.
Some things in the beginning was really confusing, but you are doing an excellent job for your first fanfic!
I really loved the image of her emerging from a rock. VERY cool. XD
I wonder what was in her dream? Are her dreams/nightmares going to be a regular part of this story?
Your character sounds beautiful and her thoughts sound about right.
This story is definitely amazing so far.
I can't wait to read more!
Please update soon!
| ste11una chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
I don't know of this story, but I figured checking out your fanfic was the least I could do. ]
This is written very well.
The story seems awesome so far.
It's interesting, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it.
I wonder how involved Krotos will be in the story...?
And why the maiden will emerge when she does?
Hm...I can't wait to find out!
I hope you update soon! _
| MilanRouge chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This was truly a great start and a wonderful and interesting idea.