|Reviews for Forever Red Again: Trial By Fire|
| HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I'd really like to see you come back and work on this one. I'm hoping that when you do the combining and trying to lay the foundation for SPD, that you include Tommy in those plans, especially since you've just gotten him back together with Jason.
A little backstory interspersed with things would be great: like where has Jason been since at least Forever Red? What was he doing when he got recruited for the Forever Red mission? When did he and Tommy start their relationship? That kind of stuff.
| Buffyxenaman chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
good luck and more soon
| SaradocCraver101 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I love it keep it up. _
| thunderincrimson chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Yay you posted it Charlie! I'm so happy! XD And there's also Andrew Hartford! I love his character! I can't wait to read more! but knowing your stories I won't be disappointed!
| Be A Warrior Casseau chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Great beginning! I hate that Jason will have to go without Tommy, though. Should be a great mission-can't wait to see what happens! Btw, how do you plan to pull SPD from the future? Update soon!