Reviews for You need to shower
TsukiNoMikoBrazil chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
hi XD yay! new chapter ] thanks for updating! I'm really liking this fic XD see you! kisses, bye bye.
Hier chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
WOOHOO A BIRTHDAY PARTY! Can't wait for that to come along ;D. Thank you for sharing your story, it's been fantastic..Alice always has her way huh? ;]
Alexawynters chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
lol glad i looked to see if there was an authors not at the bottom. that did help clear it up a bit. and OH i love you for continuing this. you should write more please? love it! it makes me gigle. and HA! Us dirty minded? you wrote it! lol be thankful we're dirty minded, cuz we read it and enjoyed it so nyah lol. Good chapter. More please and soon
Life-Live-Love-Learn chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
you should definitely expand this and forget about edward its all about bellice
Citrus Fever chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Loved it! Very good and satisfying. I do hope you expand this story. :)
TsukiNoMikoBrazil chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
hi ) that was funny! please continue if you can...I'd love to read more of Alice/Bella. thanks ] kisses, bye.
SleaterKinney chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
haha i laughed evilily the moment i read the summary , nad i know i had dirty thoughts to about the shower times with alice and bella thank god for stepahnie meyer hehehe *laughs evililY* i loved it
jamie chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I say keep going at least to know what edward has to say
D chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
good story base, missed the juice bits though (
ryouXichigo-lover chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
plz plz plz plz plz do more i want to see edwards reaction awsom fic could of had more lemon in it though o well lext time anyway hope to read more

Alexawynters chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
*giggles* that was evil, but definitely hilarious. you should expand. more please? although its perfect as a one shot, its just my greedy lil self wants to read more :)
TooVirgin2BGay chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
wow my god its amazing *die* **
Prim8 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
the shower scene should be longer and more detailed, lol :D

nice fic _
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Good !

I really liked it. XD

Please continue.
JenDaniels chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
That was great! I really enjoyed reading it, and I would love to read more. So please, please, please continue :-)
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