|Reviews for You need to shower|
| Antlers chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
| Pie3 chapter 12 . 7/20/2009
The story was awesome.
| Conshea chapter 8 . 7/10/2009
this is an awesome story theres so much suspense and pasion and its really hawt i wouldve never thought alice and bella like i kinda did when i was reading the book but never like you did it its amazin
| DazzlemeDeathly chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
The last sentence made me laugh so much!
It really wasn't that funny.
But hey my mind works in weird ways.
Awesome story btw.
| NIMBUl chapter 12 . 6/23/2009
awesome loved the end...and of jessica
| Rain Addict CM chapter 12 . 6/18/2009
it was nice to know that Jessica got to get her gay on ) good story! and nice ending _
| xXxZellyxXx chapter 12 . 6/6/2009
whole thing wonderful, ciao
| Emoeverafter chapter 12 . 6/5/2009
i love your story!
| kagomite chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I absolutely loved this story...Great job :D
| Geezorbee chapter 12 . 6/3/2009
Amazing story, and I loved the twist with her powers D
Think Jane left a little quick though... 10 sentences or something and she was out again / You could have made more out of it, but hey, it's your story. I really enjoyed reading it!
Keep up the fantastic writing, and good luck!
| Concealed-Softness chapter 12 . 6/2/2009
Wow that was cute I liked it a lot. Congradulations on completing this story. It was definitely a great read. Keep up the good work.
| cadie chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
that was kinda great. and i've always wondered about those showers.. :P haha
| cullen r us2 chapter 12 . 5/24/2009
| scribe of eternity chapter 12 . 5/23/2009
hey great story loved it.
the best part of the story was the last chapter and then the last line.
it was the iceing on the cake. there wedding cake *dou don don tis* lol
great finishing the last paragraph made me fell alittle sad cause she out lives everyone but at least she gets alice and vice versa.
| merlinsc chapter 12 . 5/22/2009
Great wnding. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.