Reviews for You need to shower
BrownEyez44 chapter 12 . 9/16/2009
I just spent the last 24 hours reading both of your Bellice fics, and I loved em both! D

Especially You Need To Shower! lol

I hope you write another one soon, or even consider a sequel to one of these, preferrably You Need To Shower, cause I want to see some of the things they face with Bella's power and possibly children for the girls, I think it'd be fun to see xD

Anywho, setting you on alert, don't wanna miss anything new! )
Jacob is so mine chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
i was kind of wonderng about this too...though i never thought anything like this would happen kind of scar but i liked it lol this was so wrong (
Unpred1ctablE chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
This story is awesome. Thank you so much for writing and posting it! _
Hazelstar chapter 12 . 8/17/2009
Man, I loved this story! And I liked the part with Jessica, random, but funny
Antlers chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
Pie3 chapter 12 . 7/20/2009
The story was awesome.
Conshea chapter 8 . 7/10/2009
this is an awesome story theres so much suspense and pasion and its really hawt i wouldve never thought alice and bella like i kinda did when i was reading the book but never like you did it its amazin
DazzlemeDeathly chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
The last sentence made me laugh so much!

It really wasn't that funny.

But hey my mind works in weird ways.

Awesome story btw.

Jazzy x
NIMBUl chapter 12 . 6/23/2009
awesome loved the end...and of jessica
Rain Addict CM chapter 12 . 6/18/2009
it was nice to know that Jessica got to get her gay on ) good story! and nice ending _
xXxZellyxXx chapter 12 . 6/6/2009
whole thing wonderful, ciao
Emoeverafter chapter 12 . 6/5/2009
i love your story!
kagomite chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I absolutely loved this story...Great job :D
Geezorbee chapter 12 . 6/3/2009
Amazing story, and I loved the twist with her powers D

Think Jane left a little quick though... 10 sentences or something and she was out again / You could have made more out of it, but hey, it's your story. I really enjoyed reading it!

Keep up the fantastic writing, and good luck!

Concealed-Softness chapter 12 . 6/2/2009
Wow that was cute I liked it a lot. Congradulations on completing this story. It was definitely a great read. Keep up the good work.
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