Reviews for This Love
FireGirl09 chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
This story is great! Please update soon!
Ucopia chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
The next chapter skips two-five years in the future. This is were the humor comes in. :) REVIEW!

My life-raft in sea of depressing stories. Good, but depressing. Yellow Butterflies? Rabid platypuses. Traumatized five year old? Psychotic purple squirrel. We may equalize out eventually. Until then,

DEATH TO THE SALAMANDERS!

Eventually;

Agriad
allygoofymae chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
I don't think you could have pulled any harder on my heartstrings in this chapter if you tried. So sad, yet so sweet all at the same time. Keep up the awesome job!
Drama4More chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
Really good as always. Poor Bella. Has to go through all that. I was like what when she said she saw her mom, but I understood it at the same time. Clever idea about that. And what an ironic thing that she has a lion. Lol.
M1nk chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
awesome chapter

i felt bad for little bella and especially all of them because they had to endure her screaming when she woke up.

and that song was very beautiful i loved it i looked it up and listened to it while i read the lyrics

:D

well it was amazing just like you and i can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter

so keep up the great work

xD
kitty katty123 chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
that's so sad. i like the song it really dose fit with the chapter
Mjm544 DUH not real name chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
Please please please keep writing
believeinthebeautyofdreams chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
that is so sad. i liked chapter 2 the best. please continue!
M1nk chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
that was...i can't put it into words

i love it and you should so continue!

xD

well keep up the amazing work

i can't wait to read the next chapter

:D

I GOT IT!

that was mind blowing

xD

LoL!
kitty katty123 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
aw that's so cute!
allygoofymae chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I really like your story so far. I've read some other stories about the Cullens adopting Bella, but none of them really hooked me. Yours seems like it has a much more interesting and intriguing plotline. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ucopia chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
kooel!

"Freaky Bella!" -Jacob black from Breaking Dawn

Bella seems more like a vampire than Edykins does. And what happens next? Dunt, Dunt, Dunn. Creeper, Creeper!

Kreeper- Hypre senstive person with specific interests.

Talk you later, I have go work, AGAIN!

Agriad
angeleyesis chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
this story seems interesting so far, so please edit more chapters soon!
Insane Alchemyst Wizard chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
This is so cool. And its really GOOD. Keep up the good work!
veca chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
good story. hope you will update soon, not like the other stories in which they takes months to update.
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