Reviews for This Love
Sue chapter 3 . 8/31/2010
Bella was eating Blue Candies...
Sue chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
This chapter sucks major Einstein. Revise please!
Sue chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Oh my Darwin, I like totally looooooove this story!
Zikare chapter 17 . 8/31/2010
Disclaimer: I have swine flu! ROFLMDEO

I think next time Edward enrolls in high school, he should say his parents died of Swine Flu!

By the way, I only have 6 chapters left to review, but you need 8 more review to make it to 300. What are you going to do about this? I could post a few anonymous reviews...

Talking about Aro, and then all that matters is me and him. I thought this meant Aro and Bella at first!

If a shark showed up, Emmett would drink it!

OMD, I forgot the treaty! LOL
Zikare chapter 16 . 8/31/2010
If you are going to review your own chapter, at least do it anonymously!

Or, make another profile name!
Zikare chapter 16 . 8/31/2010
I think they should go to Vegas!

I like the bromance! Jasper is totally not down for it!

"I feel that your* warm and deserve better and that I love you"

should be you're. This typo took me a long time to figure out...I must be tired.

Paul has parents! Wow, I never knew...

Emily was sam's mom, no imprint- LOL

No! Don't eat the chicken! World will spontaneously combust! Jasper will not like it
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 22 . 8/30/2010
oh, yippee! a sequel! you should go update that
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 21 . 8/30/2010
ish phooey.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
YAY! Edwad solved the problem!
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 19 . 8/30/2010
no. bella can't die
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 18 . 8/30/2010
hi
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
dun dun dun!

The treaty!
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 16 . 8/30/2010
this is one of my favorite chapters despite the fact that i despise weddings
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 15 . 8/30/2010
i should rewrite this chapter
Zikare chapter 15 . 8/28/2010
What's with the quotes at the beginning of every chapter? Truthfully, I skip them.

Why is Bella fawning over Emmett and his torn arm, when JASPER GOT BIT. That is the real injury...Poor poor Jasper sob

Bella broke Emmett and Rosalie up? What a home wrecker, Darwin! Well, at least they made up!

Why does Edward always threaten to run off to Volterra for suicide? Personally, if I were a suicidal vampire, I would douse myself in carosen, and light myself on fire...I think going to the volturi for death is more like sliting your wrists: you don't want to die, you just want the attention.

Yeah! Jacob imprinted on someone his own age and species, right?

BTW, this one was not that bad. It is def. better than ch.2
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