Reviews for This Love
Zikare chapter 14 . 8/28/2010
Wait, you allowed Alice to be present during the Volruti fight? What if she gets hurt? Jasper will never forgive you for that! To risk her life for one supremely powerful humans?

Go Rosalie! She put Emmett's arm back on, right?

Jasper was biten! No! You should have just let Bella die...Not Jasper! Anything but that. DOesn't he have enough scars already?

Paul died? Awesome. There were WAY to many wolves in La Push anyway...
Zikare chapter 13 . 8/28/2010
So Bella is related to Eleazer? awesome!

LOL-with mind control

But, you should change I swear to god, to I wear to the Flying Sphaghetti Monster (in your A/N)

I like the super powers thing...

So, let me see if I got this right: Bella is a super power, and Aro wants her. But, Aro wants her in a fight? And this is the reason for the Cullen/Volturi showdown? I like it, but I still think my reason for a Cullen/Volturi showdown is funnier...Vampires don't lay eggs!
Zikare chapter 12 . 8/27/2010
Does making Bella lay an egg count as pregnant?

Oh, and I was confused about Zafrina visions. It seems like Bella says she can see them and then she cannot?

And what were the Egyptians doing in the bathroom? Do I even want to know?
Zikare chapter 11 . 8/27/2010
As dangerous as Jasper- LOL

I don't like Jacob here...He comes on too strong to fast and acts like an Einstein.

Some of the flow is Edward and Bella are suddenly in a really intense relationship- sure it could happen, just add a paragraph saying it happened before they are all over each other.

And she remembers the scent bothers him from when she was little?

But, I like think reason for the Volturi war better than the Nessie reason
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 14 . 8/27/2010
awlalala. I can't wait to see what Zikare thinks
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 13 . 8/27/2010


the only reason i'm reviewing is so Zikare will have a chance in being the 300th reviewer
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 12 . 8/27/2010
edit this chaptuh
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 11 . 8/27/2010
you must must must must fix this chapter.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 10 . 8/27/2010
you need to fix this chapter
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 9 . 8/27/2010
the three hundred dollar dress thing was random.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 8 . 8/27/2010
# 3 "Why did Bella go with the Volturi when she clearly wasn't needed?"

— Same as the answer for question 3

TYPO! hahahaha
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 7 . 8/27/2010
yawn, yawn, yawn. I'm tired and bored.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 6 . 8/27/2010
YES! Write the one shot! :D
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 5 . 8/27/2010
Incest. hehe.
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 4 . 8/27/2010
Rosalie is a drama queen and Emmett is whipped.
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