This was very well written! I enjoyed reading it immensely :D

I believe you portrayed Bakura brilliantly. I love how broken Ryou was. And the writting really brought the church to life.

So thank you do much for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it ;D

This blew my mind. Basically, I loved it. The description especially was something I'd like to commend you on.

Shivers went down my spine /

What a great depiction of this scene~ Ryou's duality concerning his relationship with Bakura was interesting! :)