Reviews for The choices make up history
Shalk Zailackar chapter 18 . 5/19
Awesome story! I really look forward to the potential changes that are coming on the horizon.
SeverlyLate chapter 18 . 4/10
Allinall its well written...
But reads like one those manga fillers... Inconsequential and leads nowhere.
SeverlyLate chapter 12 . 4/10
Ok, the angsty and awkward morality parts of the story becoming re-eally tiresome...
SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 4/10
Intriguing premise...
UchihaGohan chapter 18 . 3/31
This story is excelent
The Mourning Willow chapter 18 . 3/29
Is Minato(Naruto) going to become a Fuinjutsu Master?
Iryelb chapter 18 . 2/26
This is a really interesting story, I've never really been interested in stories that have to do with Minato's life, probably because I know how it ends, but with Naruto calling the shots it's a whole different ball game. I would really appreciate it if you could send me a response and tell me if you're going to update this ever again, because it's been over five years since you last updated.
polarpwnage chapter 8 . 1/19
Obito? Isn't Minato like 10 years older than him? He was his Jonin sensei
Hawk chapter 18 . 10/27/2014
This was shaping up to be a very interesting story.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 18 . 9/7/2014
Very sad this hasn't been updated. It's quite unique. I haven't heard of anyone who has attacked Minato's young life, especially from a time-travel point of view. What a fun idea. :D
Amidamaru88 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
- overall rather good, the change from canon to your version could have been done in a better way
- coincidental incest, damn ...
- curious if the kids died the first time around
- you started writing this before it was revealed that Kushina was the previous jinjuriki and had her fancy chains
- great chapter lenght
- good grammar
Well rest in peace
Nibiki chapter 18 . 7/24/2014
So. ... Are you still alive? Have you finally abandoned this story? Or, is it on an indefinite hiatus?
Flaming Rose chapter 3 . 7/8/2014
Sorry, at the beginning of the first sentence in my last review, it was supposed to say, "If you believe in 'Fourth Hokage was his dad thingy', then Kushina was his mother."

I probably explained that wrong, but that's the usual pairing for his parents.


I still feel like I'm explaining it wrong…
Flaming Rose chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
Kushina was actually the name of Naruto's mother, just to let you know.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2014
Huh, this is a pretty cool story. Too bad it isn't continued.
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