Reviews for Lelouch's Revenge
Angel-the-hedge chapter 21 . 5/19
i like this story a lt
Mirrandir chapter 6 . 1/24
A good story, I enjoy reading it. You had some interesting ideas. You also have a very good knowledge about Code Geass. With a practice you will get better and better but it is clear to me that you write from your heart and that is what is the most important. Hope you won't stop writing if that is what you like. You should not be afraid of criticism - if we all would listen to those who criticize us for our mistakes instead of keeping practicing - then humanity would have never started walking on two limbs ;-)
Anonymous Bugger chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
I kind of like it, but the spelling destroys the story. Also, you can't just call somebody a half-blood because they live a double life.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/2/2013
love it update please
Ppsh chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Dialogue and grammar/spelling mistakes could use some serious work. This is not really readable to me; well, not enjoyable at least.

The premise and events aren't too bad... although why an entire nation would surrender just because the Prime Minister is captured is beyond me. With that said they did the same thing in canon so it's not really your fault.
God of Stories chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Well the first part of the story was okay until you did a summary of Lelouch thinking to himself. Ruined the whole thing imo
Gul'Gul chapter 21 . 3/22/2011
keep up the good work
xXxXxX chapter 20 . 1/29/2011
hope you will write the next part (: because i really like your story :D

and an idea to how you maybe can get some new writing idea and the spirit to write again. would be just to hang out with friends and just relax, get ideas from youre surroundings. (:

good luck and im hopefully waiting for the next chapter :D
Slices chapter 20 . 1/12/2011
Nice story can't wait for the next update.

Why do I have the feeling Nunally is Zero, not sure.

Keep up the good work.

Slices out
Ragez chapter 20 . 1/9/2011
Great job!
Keimichi chapter 20 . 1/8/2011
Good story, but you need to look at your grammar.
nxkris chapter 19 . 12/15/2010
great chapter. i love that lelouch finally has the gawain. as an idea for your writing two things that might help, rewatch the series (this can give a lot of new ideas that you can include) and second is reread your story (on the net not on your comp, for some reason reading it on a word program makes it like proof reading while reading it online is like reading any other fanfic and usually brings a lot of new ideas for how the story can go.) it would be nice if there is still a Chinese invasion and at that point introduce both the lancelot and gilgamesh having flight systems. also if you continue this story for into R2 eventually lelouch should also gain Rakshata to work with loyd and cecile, maybe have guren captured like anime and upgraded to guren seiten, but have gilgamesh be destroyed so kallen takes guren and suzaku (who should be loyal to lelouch above all at this point) given albion. also please keep the gawain around, let it be damaged and upgraded, but keep it around for the entire story or give it a replacement gawain (something) like lancelot albion, the shinkiro was a nice machine but i always felt it was nothing on gawain since it only had one weapon and the shield that didnt allow any counter attacks, though the mirror trick was nice. update soon.
iony17893 chapter 19 . 12/11/2010
good chapter even though there were some sentences that i didn't know who was talking

but still good chapter can't wait for the next chapter !

please continue the story and update it ]
Lt. Thornton chapter 19 . 12/9/2010
this story is very good and im deeply saddened to hear that your gonna possibly not do it anymore
Lancelot Seiten 1 chapter 19 . 12/9/2010
Maybe you can try to listen to some music that you like while you are writing, because it might help with your consentration when you are writing (it works for me when I have to do some really boring homework atlest). Or you can just watch the code geass series again for inspiration.
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