|Reviews for Looking Beyond|
| SDL.077 chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
i love the idea for the story but in the summary you dont have to tell so much about the story. its a bit irrelevant...
no flames intended
| Rebecca chapter 11 . 2/13/2010
please please please continue this story D If you ever got the permission to publish this story I would so buy it )
| barbiedoll123 chapter 11 . 6/30/2009
| PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 10 . 6/18/2009
i loved it
i loved the way edward comforted bella
and the party and simple beauty of the snow was great!
cant wait for more!
| barbiedoll123 chapter 10 . 6/18/2009
aw i really dont like his grandparents
| barbiedoll123 chapter 9 . 6/18/2009
| Lily Beth O'Connor chapter 9 . 6/16/2009
It was nice and fluffy up until the dinner the Edward's grandparents, which was a good way of showing the family's disapproval of Edward and Bella's relationship, and of Bella's pregnancy.
This is a good story, but just take care on your grammar and punctuation.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Death By Insanity chapter 9 . 6/15/2009
damn. grandma&grandpa cullen are like evil. even though i would be in the same position as bella. cause on my dads side im considered the bad grandchild. see if i was to get knocked up, i would be looked down on, a discrase to the cox name, the baby an abomination, me a slut and yada yada. BUT if my cousin was to get knocked up, she would be praised, treated like a queen, something to make the cox/antal name higher. it would be the greatest thing in the world if she got knocked up. but i hope bella doesnt do something stupid that would cause harm to her and the baby. oh no. i just gave you an idea. edward needs to reassure bella that what his grandparents said is not true and never will be true.
| barbiedoll123 chapter 8 . 6/11/2009
im glad they are keeping the baby
| barbiedoll123 chapter 7 . 6/8/2009
im glad that carlisle came through
| Lily Beth O'Connor chapter 7 . 6/7/2009
really good chapter!
Nice high dramatics.. i love it!
oh just one thing... remember to put full stops at the end of every sentence. It's not a big thing or anything but for some weird reason it just gets to me...
anyway, good work!
| barbiedoll123 chapter 6 . 6/4/2009
aw edward is just so sweet
| barbiedoll123 chapter 5 . 6/4/2009
i love it
| barbiedoll123 chapter 4 . 6/4/2009
im glad this is so different from all of the other stories about everyone being perfect
| PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 6 . 6/3/2009
i really liked this chapter
i kinda suspected that she was pregnant
i like it
i cant wait for more!
update soon please!