|Reviews for PataGato Begins|
| kari chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
hi great stoy mabey make it longer ok
luved it othwise realy nice story hehe
| Pippa digimon freak chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
It was too short in my appinion and something wierd happened in the punctuation, I like PataGato but not much and you needed more emotion your other storys are abit better!
| ZERO MASON chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Nice, and you have got ok with the story. I have just one thing to say. You realy need to us more emoshons in your story. It's kind of flat, but you are new at writing PataGota and was well plan in my mind keep it up and some day you would be great at PataGota. bey.
| Lord Pata chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Short and cute but I don't think was necesary put Veemon attacking Patamon, the crying thing is okay, that's humor touch but I'm sure Veemon would get over it easily.
Also I think something happened that the quotation marks and other symbols got changed for odd characters o.O
other than that it was cute