Reviews for Secret Agent Kairi
LissaLoveKHSoKai chapter 28 . 7/21/2013
Wow! This story looks good enough to make a programme/tv show i can watch everyday. I LOVE IT!
SoKai 4eva!
Keep writing :)
Ash pop chapter 26 . 7/24/2012
what about rhiona and Leon :(
Popcorn princess chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
Yeah I Agree with pinky Pie Cloud x Tifa all the way u should do something about that be four somebody rages
Pinky pie chapter 6 . 7/23/2012
I love everything about your story the one thing that makes me uncomfterble is the AreithxCloud thing becuz it's suppose to be TifaxCloud Because in final fantasy there a couple so the technically there a couple in any game so u should do something about that but besides that im love it :D
jj chapter 19 . 3/4/2012
again the fuck? sea salt ice cream not fucking vinilla twilight
jj chapter 19 . 3/4/2012
the fuck? y not make it destiny island i mean really and were the fuck is tidus and wakka and if u added the goosip girl plot factor y not expand on it it jusst looks like a uneasesery adon that makes the story more unescicerily complicated and the same goes for selphie
Zoe the Hunter chapter 25 . 2/6/2011
haha lov the story! TEAM ROXAS ALL THE WAY! riku was a jerk throughout the whole KH series, while roxas was jus tconfuzzled. so yeah. TEAM ROXAS!
iawesome213 chapter 2 . 1/28/2011
hahaha omg even before i read the azu manga diaoh thing i was like:"woah she kinda sounds like Miss Yukari" hahahahaha thats funny
disneyfanatic09 chapter 28 . 11/20/2010
LOVED it! I've enjoyed it from th beginning! I'm still hoping you put Roxas and Namine together! I'm glad none of them main characters died! Amazing story! Can't wait for the next one!
Reona Fox chapter 28 . 10/29/2010
This was one of the most amazing fics I have read in over a year now. Truly it is. Not many times where you get a long, but wonderful storyline like this. You could have made it a little less cheesy in the ending but I guess the way it did happen, it fits. Kudos to you, . .

The only problem I saw throughout the story was punctuation and grammar errors. That was a major flaw in the story, but it was still amazing nonetheless.

Ever considered getting a BetaReader? (hint hint)

~The reaper of chaos and peace

Reona Fox
53007 chapter 28 . 10/21/2010
I've just finished reading this and I thought it was gone really great. I found your statement on chapter 8, about the 'fluffy, dovely' thing insteresting, but I know it's a problem and I would say to base it off true events. But it's really your choice if you want to. Anyways, good job and I liked the plot of the whole story. Sincerely, 53007.
NinjAxXxRecoN chapter 9 . 10/9/2010
to the author of the series: "Secret Agent Kairi"

ok, i've had all i can stand and i cant stand anymore. i just need to point out that you should probably make a revised version of this fan-fiction, because there are plenty of grammar errors, and a few (though i'm not exactly sure) spelling errors, in each chapter, and it's making it kinda hard to read. I mean, the plot line is still completely captivating, but the grammar errors and such are kinda putting me on the boundary now. also, there seems to be a restatement factor or whatever, because the characters are repeating the narration. if you want me to, with your permission, i can put the chapters into my whitesmoke program so it can automatically revise it and get rid of any grammar errors then upload it, giving you all the credit for the plotline and such. let me know if you'd like my services. from, Raisora144.

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NinjAxXxRecoN chapter 8 . 10/9/2010
I highly doubt that you're "not that good at writing romance pieces". from what i've read (by the way i've read many other SoKai romance fan-fictions), you've put in a perfect balance of action and romance to catch my eye with this story. keep up the good work with your fanfictions, and i hope to read some more SoKai from you soon.
ppk chapter 28 . 10/4/2010
great. personally i would like to see the whole group of them join, and more vincent
Tetsudai-kun chapter 28 . 9/30/2010
ic ant stop smiling becuz of this
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