|Reviews for Paradise Lost|
| SniperKasul chapter 15 . 9/28/2013
Damit ... I said that I wouldn't cry ... but now I just can't hold the tears back. You're an so amazing, fucking awesome writer.
As Leon/Ada Fans we can just hope that one day they'll be together.
Go on writing like this (mabe not so much depressing parts) and everything is going to be perfect.
| Gamefreak1234567 chapter 15 . 12/21/2012
Aw! Im so happy for them. idk if i said this before but aeon is definitely my favorite couple and i could definitely see this happening to them in the future but you should write a sequal to this because i want to know if leon goes back to work or if he stays home with ada. Is it a boy or girl and what are they going to name the baby? I also want to know what kind of cravings she gets.
| Dragunav chapter 15 . 7/8/2011
yeah well that last part was pretty obvious . it usually happens. I liked this story alot and i hope to see more from you.
| Zackanagem999 chapter 15 . 2/18/2010
Ohh God...I'm crying here...this is the best fanfiction I've ever read until today! Thank you very much! It was everything...it was...perfect! I loved it! Congratulations!
| Zackanagem999 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
God I'm getting...I don't know! I'm almost crying here! xD
Very planned...you made it well...:)
| brittany brittany chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
AW...how sad i really loved it from the bottom of my heart, but im completely sure they wouldn't kill leon s. kennedy. keep up the great work Canis!
| brittany brittany chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Coming from a well known singer like me that was a perfect story, and really would love to read more thank ya hola!
YEAH RESIDENT EVIL ROCKS!
| Agent Kennedy chapter 15 . 6/6/2009
Awesome story. My god you had me going up and down back and forth. I didn't know how much more I could take before I would break down. And then all at once the weight was lifted. Two thumbs up to you milady.
| QueenVanillaCoke chapter 15 . 4/30/2009
Ahw! How sweet that is!
XD This is such a cute story! I like it! Shes pregnant - and hes gona be fine and will coming home- SWET!
Now ive understand the type of writing from this story- its very interesting! Huh! So sweet and wonderful!
I love AdaxLeon so very well! Ill hope Capcom allow us to see them again in a amazing gameV
Please, write more of them!
| Crimson-Butterfly89 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
excellent chapter, sorry if this s short but im very tired and i have a lot of work to do. but yes, i enjoyed this first chapter. normally i just wait till ive read the whole story till i review but i only have time for one chapter tonight, so this is mainly a promise of more reviews to come :) keep this stuf going, its really Ada/Leon gold!
| RevolutionZwei chapter 15 . 4/28/2009
And thus, we've managed to come full circle...kinda makes me sad, but adding that flashback was a nice touch. It makes it feel like the flashbacks have caught up, and we now know everything that happened, which was cool. I feel like if you did another chapter, then the flashback would actually be chapter 1 lol.
Either way though, the flashback was sad. They both felt it and knew something bad was going to happen...but he still had to go. Ugh lol...what a bittersweet chapter in ways. The flashback was very sad, and the current time was very awesome lol. Seriously...even though we know everything that happens, I still thought the flashback was sad...XD
But enough about that, onward to the goodness! Leon lives! He LIVES! And Ada got to tell him how she felt...FINALLY! lol...aw...so awesome. And leave it to Leon to stray from the common "Will you marry me?" XD...great stuff lol. He hasn't proposed like that in...any story I've read from you lol. But damn man! That ending was pretty mean lol...no reaction, no nothing from Leon! I wants to know! Okay...actually, I'm good lol...I have the rest of the story playingout in my head right now lol.
Loved the ending girl! And for some reason, I'm hoping that Leon being alive will make his mother want to reconsile their relationship. Ahh well...all that matters is him and Ada can be together forever now lol. Woo hoo! Congrats on another awesome complete story!
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 15 . 4/28/2009
*Gives standing ovation* Br-freaking-vo!
Great Story! I loved every moment reading this!
I thank you for the awesomness my friend! Loved the ending!
*still cheering* XD
| RevolutionZwei chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
Damn damn damn! lol...I was...quite literally grinning nonstop and pumping my fists in the air like a complete R-Tard at the end of this chapter...XDD
Yes! Freaking yes! I am...so happy right now lol. I didn't mind at all about the shortness really. Just as long as you promise to make the final chapter a good one lol...please? I'll beg if I have to. And knowing you, you'd make me beg just for the hell of it even though you were already planning to do a super-sweet ending, right? XDD...I don't care though! lol
Okay...whew...few deep breaths, and I'm good lol. Now, I guess I'll talk about the beginning, since I couldn't stop myself earlier from talking about the ending lol. I found it very sweet and totally ironic for one lol...mainly Leon saying that he was now going to die a horrible death lol. And the sweetness of Ada and the puppy was awesome. Which...of course led to them moving in together (jackpot!). I really like how you made Leon nervous and shy around her...it was expertly done my friend. Not over-done like...some other people...lol
Okay, I need the finale now! Give me closure, please! I demand...I demand some closure lol. Sweet, flufftastical...make me cry, DJ, with how sweet it will be! lol
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
*Dies of more awesomness*
The whole flashback with that puppy! Aw…!
Holy $HIT! The chapter's titel is so freaking fitting with the PDA message!
I freaking LOVE it! So incredible!
| QueenVanillaCoke chapter 13 . 4/16/2009
Argh! Im starting to cry! See what youve been done to me! Leon! Hes still alive! XD
Is this the final chapter? Please no! I cant handle with that! Ó.Ò Ada and Leon must meet each other! Please!