|Reviews for Breathless|
| whispers in the dark8516 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Yoruchi you teasing little cat, i cant help it im a sucker for a good romance scene, and that last part had me cracking up.
| Ymir chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
That was sweet keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
i LOVE this, amazing
| IxHeartxGlee chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
that was so cute;)
| Mysterion aka YoruichiXSoiFon1 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
excellent truly romantic great story dude keep it up
| jquackers chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Gah, so cute. I loved how Yoruichi proposed to Soifon. I love how it wasn't the typical get-down-on-one-knee proposal but something more special. And that last line made me crack up. So fitting for Yoruichi. Amazing job. [:
| Gintama8 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
| KillerDragon001 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
i loved the story X3
| Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Aww, simply wonderful! I loved this. So sweet
| Ryoko-hime chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
LOL, loved all the 'humps' references XD
And oh, another melt-worthy story. Lurrveed it. You are one of my new fave authors 3
| tygRrr chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
my goshh you write the cutest, fluffiest Yorusoi's, i love it xD
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Very Nice One-shot!
| Midori Akiko chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Excellent! You write great stories. I read in your profile you had another account, what was the author name for that one so that I can read more of your stories?
| BadKittyAmy chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I love the lighter hearted ending to this, it provided a nice balance to the whole thing.