Reviews for The Empty Tomb
XSuicuneX chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Reading this was interesting...wanna make it even more interesting? Try reading this while listening to the song Hayling by FC Kahuna. It's...haunting in a way...but...the beat seems to fit your 'flow'.

You rymed in some of these lines, it was cool. I knew Shadi was a ghost...but who's ghost is he?
lovehim1024 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
THIS SUCKS!
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
lol. I know, right? That's so harsh! (We writers... So obsessive! XD) Gosh, this would be SO hard for me! Good job! There was a lot of action, drama, and even some fluff thrown in! Brilliant job! U Rock on! (Shadi rules, and I really like this pairing! _)
The One Called Demetra chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I thought it was a fantastic style to use for these two; they're so Egyptian and exotic and mysterious, the style is absolutely perfect if you ask me.

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Jenivi7 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
o-o-o I kinda like the style. It's very choppy in an experimental type poetic type way. And very cute even though poor Malik died