I really enjoyed this story even if ultimately it was a sad one. Thanks

very detailed. you must have children

A remote controlled toaster ?! ROFL. Thanks

Wow. Brilliantly written. Aching. Laugh-out-loud funny. Not confusing at all. Just very sad and wonderful at the same time. It contains the seeds of a canon extension, given the sadness of the finale. Lovely work!

Ouch. Touching. Beautiful.

Nicely done

I so wqanted sarah to take something from that house but I never thought of the 'cleaners'. The writing for the daydreams was very good and fit nicely with the characters would extremely good

Oh, wow! What a great, great story!

I enjoyed this story. Sweet sorrow.

wow...i didnt know what to think at first, and then I just fell in love w/ the creative writing the more i read. great fanfic!

heart breakingly sad and beautiful!

that was intensely good.

and painful..

but its prolly exactley what she would have been thinking.

your awesome, man!

Beautifully written! I do agree that that look on Sarah's face at the end of the episode spoke volumes about what she was feeling. And I think that you've recaptured that here brilliantly!

The line "She could at least appreciate the irony of her situation; she was to be the official CIA witness to the dismantling of the life that such a big part of her wanted." really resonated with me. Perfectly stated!

I also loved the Valentine's Day bubble bath that she imagined and the remote control toaster. Really liked this fic! Keep up the great work!

Very poignant, and very well-written. Thanks.

So I loved and hated this one-shot because it is exactly what I want to see Chuck and Sarah do and everything I know will never happen. Love your writing style! Great job!