Reviews for Snow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow sorry about that last review... my mom told me to go to school and now it's after school. I just wanted to say that I thought in ch.5 you were foreshadowing sex between Harry and Hermione, which really scared me! *lol* I guess I'm just too much of a shyhead when it comes to romance. I like the kisses! You're good at writing kisses. Heck, I'm a horrible writer at kisses, I'm too shy for those too... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Everyone seems to know about this Friendship ring... which makes me even more curious and even more LATE FOR SCHOOL, but I want to read... *Sob*... I did notice a few typos throughout the chapters, but that's what they were - typos. For instance here you say "Hermioe" and not "Hermione" but as always, I'm sure you know how to spell it, so it is a mistake. I do that all the time in all my stories and even worse. Readers keep telling me my grammar is hellish to read... hence the way I hired a Beta Reader. :-) You had an excellent one for your sequel, in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm! _ Now, why stop reading with a cliffhanger like such? Harry, a hormonal 16 year old... *sigh* I know all too well the oddness that makes in my guy friends. *giggle* I like this a lot and i have little to comment since I want to read on... but I only have 10 minutes 'afore school starts... *gasp* I'll be late... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... I knew Harry felt for Hermione... and yet, he isn't quite risking himself by releasing his feelings, which makes me wonder at what point in this story they'll finally let all those words bubble up. You can thank Gary Skinner, he told me about your story. (he really likes it!) :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi... Wow, i feel sort of stupid! Took me a while to read this story - I promise you, I saw this long before and noticed you had 200 reviews... and i got that jealous twinkle in my eye... *hehe*... but alrightie! 1.) I like that the characters immediately have the same levels and depths as the ones in the true Harry Potter books. That's a good sign and in fact a VERY promising one. 2.) This was written really creatively, and since it is against the backdrop of snow, I wonder if you twist the romance just as Edith Wharton did in her classic, "Ethan Frome"... where the snow and the weather seemed to match with the mood of the story. The good days featured bright sun and glistening snow - bad days featured stormy, cloud-drawn skies. So far the story makes me see clouds on the horizon for Hermione, which is too bad... but above all, this story has a lot of promise. I'm adding it to my fAvorites List so I don't lose track of it (Again!)... *shakes head* anyhow... off to the next chapter... |
![]() ![]() OMG that was an awesome fan fiction! Im ganna go look for the other story..yippe! lol great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story, H/H forever |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh!...that was a great story i luv it soooo much...though the epiluoge was under rated...lol...neway it was a wonderful story hope u rite a sequel or another story like it... emily |
![]() ![]() OOh, this was soo good! I love the ring idea! Brilliant! You should write a fluffy sequel! Of course, I'm not sure when this was posted...so you could've already written one...hehe...hope so! This is an awesome fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fae? Uh, FYI, Sirius doesn't have a pb with saying Voldemort's name. Cool story! I've read it about eighty times! I even printed it out! |
![]() ![]() Great. You thought up the perfct ending. |
![]() ![]() That was the best story I have ever read. If I would have to guess I'd say you really are J.K. Rowling. I cant wait to read your next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! H/H forever! I don't have any ideas, but you SHOULD make a sequel, but I have no idea what you should write it about! Hey your the writer! LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, im redlion, im sorry i didnt review but i was hooked from chapter 1. this was a really good fic. REALLY, and i am about to go read the sequell. i hope it is fluffy...or has a nice plot...or has some... anyway, this fic deserves 1 to 10, hmmmm, 9 1/2. i wish it was longer. oh, and hey, go read Soul Scepter, Ryoko is very talented. keep the faith- redlion |