Reviews for The Grim
Vera Rozalsky chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
So Regulus made the same mistake Harry did at Privet Drive...

I like the way you worked in the streak of insanity in the Black line as well ("why, he even made cousin Bellatrix look normal").
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Oh, I liked this. Very realistic.
secretaryofsillywalks chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
An interesting twist and ending. The tone of this comes of as humorous to me, for some reason I read it as Regulus' snarky inner monologue, so I hope that was the feel you were going for. Overall, good job!
DeliaDee chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I was, of course, distracted by the fact that "12 Grimmauld Place" is the address of the house and not it's name (Grimmauld Place is the street, hence the 12 in front of it) and the fact that I cannot imagine who would think "pressurisation" is a word. However, I did very much like both the premise and the ending. I would suggest you pay closer attention to what you are writing. On the whole, however, this is a very nice one-shot.
Carlysaurus chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
asdaskasjkd. I love this, it's so great! The ending is incredible!