Reviews for Unbreakable
ThePurpleDragoness chapter 10 . 11/3/2010
TheColdWolfMoon chapter 10 . 2/28/2010
Um...When is the next chapter going to come out? I want to know what happens next!
Dorky-Rae chapter 10 . 2/12/2010
wow this is really really really good. I've never read a story quite like this one before. You are doing a very good job. The only problem I have is that you use "to" instead of "too" but that's just because I'm a grammar buff. _ Anyway, keep up the awesome work I can't wait to read more.
Dragon77 chapter 10 . 12/31/2009
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
kai chapter 10 . 12/30/2009
wow just wow, who woulda though iruka would think of speachless...enough of that aww sasuke and naruto get closer for a second i though naruto didnt like sasuke and really didnt want him touching him but it was only the sensation of burning butterflies in his stomache thats a good thing. well hope you can update soon
narutolover15 chapter 9 . 8/3/2009
Can't wait for next chapter!
raggamuffinprince chapter 9 . 7/7/2009
omg i love this story haha

i was so excited to see an update!

haha... Naruto not extremely smart, but not utterly stupid. love him... XD he leaves sasuke so confused sometimes.

wo... cliffie D: haha. im interested in seeing narutos reaction

cant wait for more!

kai chapter 9 . 7/6/2009
im surprised sasuke didnt break the toaster i would have they burn my toast so many naruto know about obito or has he not observed that becoming bold just hope he doesnt take things too far too fast,they really are cute noone can deny that(except madara and maybe fugaku)but really they seem pretty happy with the way things are developing so far just hope they dont end up taking two steps forward and one step you can update soon
FirieGurl chapter 8 . 5/23/2009
it is good update it soon
The Desiree Incident chapter 8 . 5/21/2009
So, Sasuke does realize his feelings for Naruto is beyond friends and he knows, or rather hopes strongly, that Naruto has these same feelings in a naive skewed view. Right? I'm just hoping I understood that part.

And wow, Obito Kakashi and Iruka? Threesome? Occassional twosome? Nice

And Itachi is the all-knowing (or close to it anyways) brother.

I'm glad you updated :) It's a good chapter, and can't wait until more in the future
kai chapter 8 . 5/21/2009
wait obito like naruto,so does that mean that narutos gonna be sorta permiscuous(is that how you spell it)in his future?well theyre cute together,sasuke and naruto,especially since naruto doesnt get the undertones behind somethings at least he says what he feels and doesnt leave much out,maybe theyre relationship will develop faster that you can update soon
kai chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
yes shiny things are a great distraction,and someones scent really can comfort you to no is a show of positiger reanforcement... you can update soon
raggamuffinprince chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
waa~ love it.

i love how sasuke secretly loves naruto's hyperness. XD

i love this story, really.

very different story line, very refreshing!

hope to see more

The Desiree Incident chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
I squealed... I'll admit that i squealed... Just the part where Kakashi found Naruto asleep, and when he murmured Sasuke's name... lol... and maybe when Sasuke asks for his jumper back, and Naruto doesn't wanna give it back lol

Sasuke already loves Naruto, huh? Hm It's so cute, a change from the beginning
tiffyhatake chapter 6 . 4/4/2009
Ah this is a great story! Update soon please!
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