|Reviews for Under My Skin|
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
What? Only one chapter?! This is amazing. So natural and real and I would love more!
| pigckle8 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Daniel and Lily were actually really cute, but what Daniel said at the end about Lily and James is so true. Dang. Hahhaha JK, I love James and Lily, but sucks that Lily doesn't know it yet! Great one-shot! Love it.
| awhiteblankpage chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
haha, i love all of these angsty moments between james and lily. totally builds up their relationship.
i loved the story, but i wish you ended it with lily running after james and slapping him silly :P hahaha, i guess i'll just imagine it in my own hand.
| Okok123 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Now, I loved this story, well writen, charicters are realistic, all of it. One thing that was kinda funky, is that if Fisher is a ravenclaw, what is he doing in the Gryfindore common room?
| hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i actually admire this fisher guy. it's pretty noble of him to be honest.
Something inside Lily withers up and dies, but he doesn’t stop there. He looks her in the eye, sweetly but honestly, and he goes on, “Nothing in the world matters when you two are talking. You’re focused in on him and only him. You’re the same as before, but with more intensity, more…fearlessness.”
He lets go of her hand. “That’s the kind of person I want to be with,” he says. “The type that isn’t afraid of saying what she thinks, that bowls me over with her passion. And you know what?” He leans in a little closer. “That bastard Potter is one lucky guy, because he gets one hell of a girl in his life. One I don’t get access to.”
| Kamai6 chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
That is great! What more needs to be said? Now on to reading your next story! Tally ho!
| ScarletRosePetal chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Haha, that's so cute! I really love how you write Lily and James; they're always so perfectly in character and you can feel the relationship between them rather than just read about it.
Just like all of your other work- amazing job!
| Mishl102891 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Really cute! Although it sucks for Lily that he broke up with her
| prongsgirl2106 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Just to say I really liked this fic!
Gonna read more ;)
| xshrimpyx chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I though that was awesome, I really enjoyed it :D
| RockinWriter chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Lol, it's cute. :)
| o.O.o.Maraudette.o.O.o chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Wow, I really liked this! It's cute and funny and I didn't see the little last convo with Fisher coming! I wish I'd thought of it, lol!
| Katie chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Cute! I like how the poem relates to the story.
| Meggily chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
I liked this-you definitely feel for Lily, but you can't help liking Daniel, the amiable guy he is. Interesting little one shot, these are always so much fun to read :-) Nice choice of tense, also!
| hashtagnofilter chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
ahaha, i liked this one