Reviews for Tribulations of Emmett
babbles chapter 7 . 8/7/2009
What the crap was Jasper talking about at the end there...

I missed this story, glad your back at it...

Poor Emmett, at least he made it through the shitstorm of withdrawl...
babbles chapter 6 . 4/9/2009
Ah so now Edward know's he has taken blood from Bella against her knowledge, Haven't these girls noticed their matching scars... I hope Edward gets Angry now!
babbles chapter 5 . 4/9/2009
Wow! Emmett is really getting dark... I hope his brothers can knock some sense into him before he kills someone, especially before he kills ALice, Rose or Bella...
dana1779 chapter 6 . 4/9/2009
Poor Emmet. He's slipping further and further. Hopefully he realizes it before it is too late! Edward is not gonna be happy with that mark on Bella's neck. I can't wait to see how that plays out. Keep on writing!
TvNut Loves Jamie Fraser chapter 6 . 4/8/2009
uh oh! whats edward gonna do about bella's mark? and loved the review comment!
Jewels64 chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
Emmett is a sly one. You really took your time writing this chapter and it shows. Well done honey! This one was paced well and it's getting suspenseful. ME LIKEY!
dana1779 chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
Emmet is losing himself. *sigh* The story is really starting to get interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens when Edward and Jasper catch up with that brother of theirs.
Mangagirly9419 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
this is carpathian too? how many stories do you plan on making with carpathian vampires? oh well...it was interesting but im not the first person you want to come yo on sriouse emmett type dealies u see i see him as a joker and when i see him serious it's from another point of view and he still isn't that serious! so when i come across stuff like this i have to get used to itnot only that but I prefer to read finished stuff if i happen to stumble upon somthing that's not finished i wait for it to like a lost puppy u understand? so i normally wait for it to finish so i dont have to wait it's not that im not reading it im waiting but if you're revewing for someone i just wait 1-2 chapters ahead of me so i dont get to boredand i still review! im so smart :D

luvs

S-V
Jewels64 chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
Okay...this is gonna get really interesting... I like the kinky, swinger mood you are building, but there is some dark foreshadowing going on and I'm curious to see how dark and vicious this might go...

Emmett is playing with fire... Jazz is under the pull of Ali... My money is on Edward to be the voice and power of reason...

Keep it up BABE! I'm hoked...
babbles chapter 4 . 3/17/2009
So nice to have the brother's together, It changes the whole dynamic...

Ali is cute and perky...

I can't wait to find out what the hell is up with this club... It's sorda gross that humans are digesting eachothers blood like that, It can't be good for you LOL!

Come on with Chapter 5!
babbles chapter 3 . 3/17/2009
Tsk Tsk... Naughty, Naughty Emmett!

So now he has drank from three girls... I see an addiction forming here... I hope his brothers come soon to help him out... I imagine Alice is next...

Good thing he didn't sleep with Tanya, I totally thought he was going to...

Up untill he mentioned to Jazz that the club was pretty great I had thought he was displeased with the place and it's goings on...
babbles chapter 2 . 3/17/2009
Ha! I knew it... It's just the way it has to be...

“Just call me Rosie.”

“okay Rosie, my last name is Cullen.”

Nice, Like I said before... Lucky Rosalie!
babbles chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
WOW! That was some Hot Schmexx...

"pulling her down to my hard shaft."

I am visualizing him with Rosalie, I can't help it, you didnt describe the girl but when I think of Emmett getting it on the person my mind puts with him is always her... So lucky Rosalie...

On to the next chappie...
Kimberlesk chapter 4 . 3/17/2009
Intriguing ... the players are all coming together. Glad Edward showed up and Jaz too! Very interested to see where you're going with this! more please!
TvNut Loves Jamie Fraser chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
lol what are the boys gonna do about alice and bella? and what will they say once they find out emmett has been properly drinking the blood?
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