Reviews for Ring Around the Rosy
Aiyame20 chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
I LOVE this story Please update ASAP :)
darkindeed chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
this story is dark indeed.

i hope edward will fall for her! .. well yeah, you planned it in a dark way but i was thinking more of 'i can't live without you' thingy :D

uh, by the way... is bella gonna be a vampire in this story? and please don't kill alice! are we gonna see some EmmetxRose here?

update soon!
TheInsatiableVampire chapter 8 . 5/16/2009

Great chapter, though I thought her admitting feelings was a bit to soon? She was just crying about be forced something she didn't want to and then she had feelings? JUST A PERSONAL OPINION DON'T HATE ME!

Anyway, amazing chapter, love it. x
suchaperfectday chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
I really loved it!

Hmm.. I wonder if Eddie will be able to resist her blood..

Update as soon as you can!
GetMeOffThisCrazyThing chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
That was short but good!
New.Age.Writer chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
I hope to see the next chapter soon,

Dark Edward rocks though he has to show some mercy soon as no mercy just makes Edward pure evil and then a two-way relastionship cant happen as it would just leave Bella to feel nothing but hate for him which we dont want.

Idea? Maybe James enters Bella's cell and trys to touch her and shes scared and Edward stops him and then Bella might not hate him so much.
Mini-ish chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
That really weird but hey it you story and I love it!
pixie chixzy chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
im still luvin it

SweetiePieSaysHi chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
Love it
arialismom chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
I hope this weekend is clear for you so you can get the next chapter out! I have to know what happens!
sillyaddict13 chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
please update soon!
LovesTheDark chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
O! Evil Edward I fucking love it.
RdRidingHood chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
ah i cant wait to see what happens great chap
BroadwayNightOwl chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
This is not lemony. This makes me sick.

Rape scenes ARE NOT NECESSARY for any story.

I know the whole "dont like dont read" bit, but seriously, this ruins the whole entire story.
Elizabeth4664 chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
Great chapter, loved it
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