|Reviews for Maximum Ride Commentaries|
| AvrilSays chapter 5 . 4/18/2010
Is it me or do you realy dislike Max?
| Piplup99 chapter 11 . 3/4/2010
Can you do my story Avenge my Angel?
| maxridefan96 chapter 11 . 3/3/2010
tht chapter was highlarious(yes i meant 2 spell it wrong)it the best fanfic i ever read it is so funny and they are so much like the flock and what they would say! keep on writing!
| Rose Fitzy chapter 11 . 3/3/2010
dude this story rocks! tis halarious! keep up the good work!
| Candy Ride-DiNozzo chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
I like Fang. I have a Fang-like person at my school. Adorable.
| SurfandSnowRider chapter 3 . 3/3/2010
dude, i so love the comentaires. keep up the good work
| Kina Kalamari chapter 11 . 3/3/2010
Just so you know, that story would be completely unbearable for me to read, but with your comments, it really makes it very, very entertaining. Nicely done, you've turned an awful story into something to laugh over.
...And I really think "EllaHeyBoys1234" took a lot of tips from Tara Gilespie. This story is way too close to My Immortal style-wise for her to not have. Unless it's a really huge coincidence.
| Kina Kalamari chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
Why did that chapter have no formatting? No italics, no bold. In the actual story anyway. Your comments were fine. Was it originally like that?
Nice chapter. Comments were entertaining, as always.
Now, on to chapter eleven...
| Maxi66 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
um i would lyk to enter a story... i so stupid. wat do i do.
| Blue Moons and Pink Suns chapter 10 . 3/2/2010
Poor, poor, Max...
BTW, I laugh at every little caption.
| HelloInfinity chapter 9 . 3/2/2010
Dude, your story is amazing!
Will you do my fan fic.
Its called Unnamed. Cause I have no name for it.
There in france..
| seraphina97 chapter 2 . 3/2/2010
omg don't make it seem like their at the school being controlled! ahh! :D haha ingenious idea, to get the flock to comment on fanfics. smart person :P
| Polodo chapter 11 . 3/2/2010
MARY SUE ABUSE! RUN! Also a very much lack of anything they could learn in Grammar/Spelling class. Time for the best cracks!:
THEY LOOKED JUST LIKE THE ONES FROM MY DREAM!
Max: OH MY GOODNESS! REALLY?
Like, Oh-Emm-Gee! I could've never guessed that! That was win.
Max: *blushing* NO! I'm just- Arg!*punches Lightning*
Lightning: *Wearing a t-shirt that says "Max's Punching Bag"* I love my job.
Ooh! Ooh! Can I take that job part-time? I heard it has an excellent medical plan!
There's Nudge, the blind boy. Iggy is an African-American girl who nevewr can stop talking.
That- that's just sad when someone can't even recognize which characters are which. I wonder how many flames this story gets...
Total: NOT IMPORTANT? *goes to curl up in a corner, mumbling to himself*
It's okay Total, you are in almost every story anyways.
"Hey! Wanna read Max's mind?"
In her head, Max thought, "I hope that we get rid of that Rainbow girl soon. She's movin in on mah mand and stealin' my little sister Angle from me! grr'
Angel: No, she's actually thinking, 'That is NOT what I'm thinking.'
Thanks, Angle; that was very informative.
Gazzy: *Farts into the room* Did someone rip one bigger one than me, The Fart Man?
How is that possible. But if he does that *mumbles to self while working over it with a chalkboard* I'VE FIGURED OUT
Okay, enough sarcasm in this review. I await the next one. *Crickets chirp*
| SurfandSnowRider chapter 2 . 3/2/2010
Ilove it! your comentaires are so funny. if your lookign for another Fan Fic i think i have just the one.
| Polodo chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
OH NOES! IT'S DE MARY SUE ATTACK! RUN!
Okay, out of paranoia stage and onto the best parts:
Ayo: Hey, You guys want to save the environment, too, right?
*The flock starts to rethink their decision.*
EPIC! Although she could've just eaten beans; just as much protein. Or rice for that matter. BAD RESEARCH!
... I HAD WHITE WINGS THAT WERE REALLY BIG!
Total: No fair! Hers got big fast. I had to wait!
Your life is almost as unfair as Max's, we know.
Ayo: This is what I get for choosing a fanfic at random...
Yes, yes it is. Good job at making it funny. If you really need a fanfic, you could use I Fail At Flock Hunting. Warning: It's a work in progress, so sorry if you do use it. Anyways, until next update! *elevator music; he returneth!*