Reviews for Shock of the Lightning
Kenneth chapter 4 . 1/3
This story... Is AWESOME
shade chapter 5 . 8/5/2015
damn and I was really getting into the story as well. I hope someone adopts this story, no offense
DefendTheUndefended chapter 5 . 4/26/2015
Nooooooooo! I loved this story too much!
atchoum35 chapter 5 . 1/31/2015
Too bad, very good story
CartelLane chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
Now I'm starting to get mad...
fellow chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Damn...
JinchuurikiOfTheLeaf chapter 5 . 7/6/2014
I'm sad that your discontinuing this. It was a very highly good story so far. :)
Kidimaru chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
Only noticeable mistake was that Nee-san is actually Sister. Now Nii-san is Brother. Onee-san is Older Sister and Onii-san is Older Brother. Just thought that might help you in the future. The mistake was near the beginning of the chapter.
Doctor Dandy chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
It's always confused me how people start a story with the main character losing like that's supposed to interest me in some way.
UltraMickey chapter 5 . 6/28/2014
Ain't that disappointing. I quite enjoyed your stories. Sad to see you go.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/30/2014
Please post the next chapter.
SkyLeafClover chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
Continue please
MastermindZangetsu99 chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
Awesome fic and story plot. I love it. Update soon if not NOW
IK chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
Sad, but I like it.
Angels will bleed from pain chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
Omg best dark depress naruto story so far! Want more!
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