Reviews for He's a Married Manager
Helixical chapter 1 . 8/15
Your description is trash.

Original content is leagues better than this derivative, masturbatory bullshit. What's the point of writing anything if you're just going to do a shitty job of retyping the plot of the source material.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30
stupid quitters I'm glad you became a failer to do another one or finish anything since you quit this great story
Assume chapter 5 . 12/23/2016
Way to make a gal slit her wrist...

I mean life happens! Been a few years since this was written, but was still worth the read. Best of luck.

swartzvald chapter 4 . 10/12/2016
I quite like this story, but one thing bothers me.
What's a dingly-dang?
Guest chapter 5 . 7/28/2016
If there are parts (and trust me, I understand as there are many parts in Akamatsu's manga) that turn you off, just excise them.

The nice thing about fanfiction is you can throw it off the rails if you so choose. Don't like the violence, don't keep putting Keitaro into the same, cliché predicaments. Have him be married carry a stronger influence in keeping him out of trouble. Don't like the poor guy being chase by a ton of women, keep it all casual and platonic. No need for romance. Other than between Keitaro and Tomo.
AlexCephon chapter 4 . 7/25/2016
Thanks for the awesome fic.
Dunedain ranger of the north chapter 2 . 4/2/2016
Anyone else figure out the BL reference?
Dunedain ranger of the north chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
I've read this story once before and found it really interesting, so I decided to give it another shot. I love the plot of this story as it's the only one I have found of this kind for this series, I mean sure there are other crossover stories where Keitaro has a kid, is a kid, is engaged to another, has a twin, etc. but this is the only one where he shoes up with a wife. I really wish you could either continue this story or put it up for adoption for someone else to take it over and continue it.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2015
Wow I like Kei x Tomo way better than the canon couples. They're adorable.
SomebodyLost chapter 5 . 8/20/2015
Since faving/following you without any comments makes you nuts...


This story has really high potential. It adds some subtle maturity from Keitaro's side that I hoped that would affect the others, and Momo keeps it light and fun. I really love it that they're devoted and obviously in love - it's rare to see a couple going through their life. Most (romance-centric and others) stories often have the characters coming together, but just glosses over the Ever Afters.

Their well-adjusted and happy marriage is very inspiring. I really hopedto see how the Hinata Inn residents would be changed.

Anyhoo, I understand the hardships of Real Life and its troubles, but someday, I hoped that you'll be able to continue this. This is a real gem. T_T

P.S: Have you watched 'I Can't Understand What My Husband Is Saying'? It's about an office lady and her otaku husband and their daily lives. Your fic gives off vibes like that; I recommend that you watch it! :D

Thanks for writing!
BL-fan chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Loved how you put the start of Black Lagoon in urban enviroment. I would love to read more of that.
SoaringEagle13 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Have you considered putting this fic up for adoption?
swartzvald chapter 5 . 7/10/2014
Well, that's dissapointing. But what can you do?
swartzvald chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Wait, wait, Tomo? Let's throw chiyo-chan off a cliff Tomo Takino?
You, sir or madam, are a genius of the first order. I salute you!
SoaringEagle13 chapter 5 . 6/8/2014
A real shame. That's another dead fic to add to the list.
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