|Reviews for Marriage Arrangements|
| AbK chapter 43 . 4/1/2020
Thank you for the journey abk
| vampirelady13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2020
Spineless Bella in the house. I would of told her to go screw herself.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/12/2019
You’ve got the 19th and 20th century completely intermixed in this story. I was quite convinced with the first chapter that it was set in the 1950’s - I was trying to make sense of the vernacular, with the setting. I shouldn’t have bothered trying.
| AbK chapter 2 . 4/7/2018
The story is interesting but the grammar is of putting abk
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/22/2018
Bella is a fucking duchess? If that's true then why would anyone wonder why Edward is marrying her? Hes not higher then a DUKE! And that's the truth of it so to insinuate that gossip is going around that SHES not good enough for HIM isn't believable in the least.
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/22/2018
YES I'm sure of it...ive read this somewhere...it was only a few chapters. Bella and Edward had an arranged marriage...he didn't know until right before bella got there...Edward was fucking tanwhore the actress...yup...so the question is who stole whos idea?
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/22/2018
THERE ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOO MANY MISTAKES, it makes it hard to read.
And I'm 90% sure ive read this exact same story before somewhere else...but it was better written.
| 769vnkavkhcgd chapter 7 . 2/24/2018
Are you sure this is the 18th century?
| LibbyRose chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
i love it! Absolutely Amazing!
| meg chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
i would suggest doing some research on terminology. The word "clan" is traditionally used when describing those of scottish lineage. If you're trying to make the dialogue sound more formal then i suggest "house" instead of "clan". Particularly in the time period your story is set in, it would be considered an insult to both scottish and british people if the term clan was applied to british aristocracy
| Antara chapter 26 . 12/3/2016
Dude u are just fantastic! Can't stop reading! Wonderful for this story will be the understatement of the year! Way to go
| mahle101 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
Wow your story is so good I'd I didn't know anybetter I would say u a professional writer. I LOVE IT!
| MyladyNancy chapter 44 . 3/17/2016
thank you for sharing your talent for story telling. I very much enjoyed the last couple of days of reading
| MyladyNancy chapter 4 . 3/16/2016
I went to your page and read some of your reviews. I am looking forward to reading your story. A am assuming that English is not your first language and I am impressed that you are trying hard to put this story in English. That should enlighten the past reviewer to the challenges you are having in the 1800 setting and grammar. I can see the mistakes but don't find them difficult to convert into 1the 1800 setting.
| yarnfan4life chapter 44 . 1/14/2016
love it please write more