Reviews for Wrong? |
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Huredhiel chapter 19 . 4/5/2011 *huggles* love it like always :D Last part with Riku, Tidus, and Lulu was funny lol. Until next time hun |
Sakura Camui chapter 19 . 4/3/2011 waejkglwf YEY! Another update. c8 Thanks so much, not much happened but I still definitely enjoyed it. I know you said regular updates weren't going to happen but pleeaaase update soon, I do seriously love this. Either way I'll wait and wait for it happily. xD |
kiki2222 chapter 19 . 4/2/2011 ohhhhh Tidus and Auron are going to get it on!XD |
Mai24 chapter 19 . 4/1/2011 I like this fic, I like it a lot :) Yeah, so Tidus is pretty much a whore, I can live with that ;) The character developement is great, and I like how you changed some parts of the story line, but kept the main parts true to the game- like Seymore being nuts, Yuna falling in love with Tidus, Auron not being very talkative. I highly suggest that when Seymore tells Kimari he killed all the Ronso that you let Tidus give him some attention. Now, I loooved the fact that you gave Lulu her revenge, I so busted a gut :D And OMG they're getting close to Zanarkend, where BOTH Auron and Tidus will go POOF in a bunch of pyerflies! They must tell eachother of their love... and consumate it ;D As for the events in Bevelle, Seymore's a complete asshole! My heart melted when you had Auron kiss Tidus, even though it was frantic and harsh, it certainly did the job! When he had his little scene with Yuna after and he realised why Auron had done that, my heart melted a little more. It's one of those moments that chokes a girl up, ya know? (yes, it's Rikku's line haha) Now I'm waiting for Aruon and Tidus to get all warm and snuggly under that warm coat of his! Gotta keep the boy from getting hypothermia! Rikku can snuggle at their feet and watch if she wants! ;) |
hilariaxd chapter 19 . 4/1/2011 Short chapter? Maybe. But SO SO GOOD. I'm looking forward to the seduction and subsequent trying-to-convince-Tidus-he's-not-worthless. Keep up the good work! :D |
Cuzosu chapter 19 . 3/31/2011 A wonderfully developing plot, and a lovely little (or not so little, as the case may be) twist. It's obvious you put thought into both the prank and Lulu's response, and how it all played into helping develop the plot. So well done, and good job. Yes, it's a short chapter. Yes, it's a remarkably quick update. Would I enjoy more of these frequent updates? Absolutely. But I also enjoy lengthy chapters, and you've done a few of those as well, lol. (I'll be honest; it's rare that I read a story that doesn't have at least an approximation of 1000 words per chapter.) I'm very much looking forward to reading Tidus' thought process and Auron's response once he acts. :D May the words just flow, Cuzosu |
Shironami chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 YAY! I was so excited when I saw this in my inbox, you really have no idea! lol. It was short but not boring, short is not as bad as boring. and it had plot set up, so yeah we can understand that. lol, go Lulu, haha |
YouAStupidHoe69 chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 I can't wait to read more! :3 |
RuneNeko chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 Aw man! that so sucks malborro balls! I was looking forward to that confrontation and you went and cut it off brutally (I can so imagine you laughing maniacally while doing so xD ) I'm all sadface now. -sits in corner and pouts- hope you update soon! And I didn't see any mistakes, so your all in the clear! x3 |
biffu chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 Lmao Lulu got them back! I love the character's development and I hope the guys will tell each other their feelings soon. I was actually re-reading the story and then you updated and I was super excited. (I did a meanie victory dance...I'm just that weird lol) can't wait to read the next chapter x3 |
honeyberries chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 I think little cupid Rikku might be the best thing thats ever happened to Auron and Tidus,because those two are really being 'cdibet'. I can't wait to see how Tidus plans to seduce Auron lol. |
Riaries chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 Tidus, just don't jump on Auron just yet. -Waits- Okay yo i didnt mean that long of a wait. Come on speed it up already lol. Oh well and man payback is a serious bitch damn. |
fireworkmage chapter 19 . 3/30/2011 Gotta love payback. So happy for the update, hope to hear more from you. |
Yatsuki chapter 19 . 3/29/2011 Oh my gods! Update! XD I love you, do you know that? This chapter is so cute. :3 I can't wait to see how this will "build up", as you put it. And hehe, Tidus seducing Auron... Please tell me you are gonna make it come true? |
Marquis Oxblood chapter 18 . 3/27/2011 Oh It took so long that I got a surprise to see this one updated! XDD haha~ but you did a greeeat job as ever! I do hope the next one will be here soon And I personally think that Yuna is so pitiful :'( Heart broken... |