Reviews for New and Improved, my Love
jk chapter 2 . 7/8/2015
so these vampires cant tell the difference between people /? cant tell when theres a vamp there? and bella treats humans like dogs?
and you thought this was a good story? written well? good plot? good character development?this stories a fucking joke
Motherof8 chapter 31 . 8/22/2013
What an odd story. Still don't understand how old the kids are and why they don't age? Anyway it was entertaining. Thanks for writing it.
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
I am thoroughly confused
vampiregirl31 chapter 32 . 11/5/2012
love it
midnight-reader112 chapter 32 . 1/23/2012
hahahaha! I'm IN LOVE with this story it's humorous but sad and it's also got that hint of romance and tragedy! GOOD STORY! *cough (laugh) *cough
IceQueen01 chapter 31 . 9/26/2010
Little-Mario chapter 17 . 7/31/2010
okay which shugo chara! theme song? the first season or another season? btw love the story :)
twiguru chapter 21 . 2/25/2010
its a freakin fantastic story...just awsm...but thers a prob...chapters 18, 20 n are not will be helpful if u take d pain of sending this story to my email is

Simaril chapter 32 . 1/29/2010
I really enjoyed this story, it was brave of you to portry the Cullen children as you did (as being a bit dense) but as you sy its what the story needed, It didn't lways flow well with but the benefit of choosin to do short chapters as you did meant tht ech chapter had a real energy to it.

Thank you for sharing
denisereyes chapter 4 . 1/13/2010
i'm confused kids? and y are they at her school?
llmtlm chapter 32 . 9/28/2009
Really good loved the story. But can u tell me why ej and nessie were only 3 years old. That was the only thing I didn't understand. Thanks
Eoz chapter 15 . 9/13/2009
I think the colours should of been:

Edward-Gold or black (blue works too though)

Alice-canary Yellow or light pink if you don't like yellow!)

jasper-Soft blue

Emmett-Grass Green!

Rosalie-Deep red or Creamy pink

Awsome story!

i am abit confused can What is Bella's power? and things like that?

Did edward leave her a second time?

Good work

Luv Eoz
timetwister9779 chapter 32 . 9/9/2009
lov it as well as your other one continue plz.

Peace out
Makasia chapter 32 . 7/29/2009
that was really good thankyou for being such an amazing writer thnx
weflytothetardis chapter 32 . 7/20/2009
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