|Reviews for New and Improved, my Love|
| jk chapter 2 . 7/8
so these vampires cant tell the difference between people /? cant tell when theres a vamp there? and bella treats humans like dogs?
and you thought this was a good story? written well? good plot? good character development?this stories a fucking joke
| Motherof8 chapter 31 . 8/22/2013
What an odd story. Still don't understand how old the kids are and why they don't age? Anyway it was entertaining. Thanks for writing it.
| Motherof8 chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
I am thoroughly confused
| vampiregirl31 chapter 32 . 11/5/2012
| midnight-reader112 chapter 32 . 1/23/2012
hahahaha! I'm IN LOVE with this story it's humorous but sad and it's also got that hint of romance and tragedy! GOOD STORY! *cough (laugh) *cough
| IceQueen04 chapter 31 . 9/26/2010
| Little-Mario chapter 17 . 7/31/2010
okay which shugo chara! theme song? the first season or another season? btw love the story :)
| twiguru chapter 21 . 2/25/2010
its a freakin fantastic story...just awsm...but thers a prob...chapters 18, 20 n are not readable...im frustrated...it will be helpful if u take d pain of sending this story to my email accounnt...it is
| Simaril chapter 32 . 1/29/2010
I really enjoyed this story, it was brave of you to portry the Cullen children as you did (as being a bit dense) but as you sy its what the story needed, It didn't lways flow well with but the benefit of choosin to do short chapters as you did meant tht ech chapter had a real energy to it.
Thank you for sharing
| denisereyes chapter 4 . 1/13/2010
i'm confused kids? and y are they at her school?
| llmtlm chapter 32 . 9/28/2009
Really good loved the story. But can u tell me why ej and nessie were only 3 years old. That was the only thing I didn't understand. Thanks
| Eoz chapter 15 . 9/13/2009
I think the colours should of been:
Edward-Gold or black (blue works too though)
Alice-canary Yellow or light pink if you don't like yellow!)
Rosalie-Deep red or Creamy pink
i am abit confused can What is Bella's power? and things like that?
Did edward leave her a second time?
| timetwister9779 chapter 32 . 9/9/2009
lov it as well as your other one continue plz.
| Makasia chapter 32 . 7/29/2009
that was really good thankyou for being such an amazing writer thnx
| weflytothetardis chapter 32 . 7/20/2009
I LOVES THIS STORY!