Reviews for Saving Face
KBates chapter 19 . 9/8/2016
I've read quite a few stories of yours over the past week and I'm really curious as to why you're so obsessed with teen pregnancy. Jareth, in your stories, feels like a weird cult leader with a pregnant teen wife-gives me a seriously creepy vibe. He doesn't come across as a folksy Goblin King or a refined courtly king-just a creepy truck driver type man who's the king of a trailer park. It's not so much dark!Jareth but Jerry Springer!Jareth and fifteen and pregnant! illiterate! Sarah. Yikes.

But I did read quite a few of your stories in spite of finding them so disturbing ... so there's that.
jasminehartbc chapter 18 . 3/16/2016
Bastet Goddess chapter 18 . 3/17/2016
WRose chapter 19 . 8/4/2015
Love it
Lady Knight of VT chapter 18 . 6/11/2015
I didn't realize there was a space limit! I've never writtten so much before! After reading this one, I think it might be my favorite! We shall see how I feel after I read another story of yours! I especially loved The Confrontation was perfect how you (hopefully) silenced anyone who would gripe about her age before they had a chance to say anything! Plus I like seeing someone who obviously loves what they're doing so much that they would research so thoroughly! You are definitely one of my favorite authors!
Lady Knight of VT chapter 19 . 6/11/2015
After reading "The King's Settling of Scores" I went to your profile to see what else you had written. I loved your writing style, and even though you might write scenes that I'm less-than-comfortable with (the closet scene from TKSoS...but even then, a dark secret part of me still enjoyed it), I can't have everything my way. That's what I have writing fingers for! It's pretty much impossible to stop in the middle of one of your fics. I've only read that one and this one, but am planning to work my way through the rest of your works! Also, on your profile, I saw where you use writing to help combat dyslexia, and while I usually notice other people's mistakes, I'm not one of those grammar freaks who feel the need to make that their review. I hope you don't get too many reviews complaining about errors! I feel a review should be more focused on the content than the words.
Guest chapter 19 . 4/3/2015
Few errors, but overall, I must say, the reviews were much harsher than I think were necessary... It was a good story. Two thumbs up! :3 maybe I'll borrow a few more thumbs...
nekochan1994 chapter 16 . 8/22/2014
1.) Why did Sarah ask for him to release time?

2.) Bran is badass.

3.) If this is about getting a child, I hope Sarah gets mad at him. I also hope that she tells him "no sex til 18, but lots of dates"
nekochan1994 chapter 14 . 8/22/2014
1.) Excellent job with Hoggle.

2.) Sarah I understand; Jareth getting into a catfight not so much.

3.) I know the whining is supposed to be off-putting, but I honestly empathize & feel sorry for sarah. She is literally a child who became more responsible through an ordeal, then she gets kidnapped & forced to go through another in the company of a sexually harassing villain.

4.) How come you took the "ballroom is real" route?
nekochan1994 chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
I like Puck.
nekochan1994 chapter 11 . 8/22/2014
1.) Oh Hoggle. Wait til Jareth and his parents reunite.

2.) Can't wait when Hoggle finds out the Lady is actually Jareth's mother!

3.) Jareth...THAT IS NO WAY TO WIN A GIRL'S HEART! emphasis on GIRL!
nekochan1994 chapter 9 . 8/22/2014
Why does she even mention she's a virgin? Wouldn't a better shield be "I'm 15, you pedophile!"?
nekochan1994 chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
I really like Olwyn! How come you chose that name?
nekochan1994 chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
ok how is that remotely amusing & what are they talking about? I really feel sorry for Sarah in all of this. I hope she wins.
nekochan1994 chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
1.) Jareth is a sexist asshole who doesn't appreciate just how awesome Sarah's outfit is.

2.) I'm surprised didn't start to cry, scream, slap Jareth's face, or a combination.
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