Reviews for Tire Swing
tawelephant chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
That was so hot. Loved it!
stariskye chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I'm glad the way you wrote Renesmee. This chapter was sweet and spicy and everything in between.

-A
motherduckatschool chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Instresting story. Good oneshot.

Maotherduckatschool
GreenEyedGirl13 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
really good i love it!
tess pattinson chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
wow! that was the best oneshot i've ever read! i wish it had chapters :( you're really good at writing about edward, bella and nessie as a family. this is so god! i love it :) even though the end was a little bit graphic for me...lol i loved the bit with renessmee and it was cute how edward was teasing bella on the swing! hehe :P

i think you're a fantabulous writer! I read heatwave a few months ago and I read a bit of it again today. I just love it! The ideas are so good and you're so good at portraying the characters. you could've publish heatwave instead of breaking dawn and i would've thought it was stephenie meyer that wrote it! you have a real talent for writing :) keep up the good work! x
giselle-lx chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Nicely done! I've been wanting to read more of your work-I confess that I haven't had time to get into the longer pieces, but when I saw you self-rec this one-shot, I thought I had to come out and read it because I know you write well. This was really tender and hot to boot. You did a nice job with creating a smutty one-shot that didn't feel like the whole thing was written in anticipation of the smut. I appreciate that. I like it a lot, and you write *very* well. Hooray for the vamp writers! (I've gotta start Heatwave. I know I'm going to like it.)
bg chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
That was fun Nessie so cute,Edward & Bella so it
gail526 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
lovely!
Edward222 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
i wud love to know what happens in the bath ;)
SeaTemptress11 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
oh, i love it! i think that you should write about the bathh ;) that'll definitely be good. tehe.
Bridget chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
wow that was really really good!

i'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

x
elise chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
this was fabiolus) the combination of bella, edward and renesemee as a familly, the rest of the cullens and edward and bella intimit togheter was just perfectD i think this can be a very god, happy and truthful to the book story) i love to her more)
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Lovely, lovely oneshot! If only BD made me feel HALF the things this story did.

For a split second, I saw Edward’s expression drop slightly and I knew exactly how he was feeling.

Nessie continued. “This is so much better than the one he told me about. I have to tell him my Daddy makes a better swing than his did,” - oh this part made me sad... but I guess her comment made up for it... I sighed in relief too
typing-pictures chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
tht was both cute and intense... lol
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Great job!
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