|Reviews for Tire Swing|
| girlbrighteyes chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
fantastic! it would be great story! or maybe a series of one-shots? which ever.
| Bapuppydog chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
ah maz ing
what can i say? please write more of these...i ADORE fluff (especially this kind between Nessie and Edward and Bella) and I dont think you will find many people who dont adore the ending :P
please continue to write these, they are chicken soup for my boring days and all the days in between :D
| SydneyAlice chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
That was wonderful! I love stories with both fluff and lemon! Great job!
| Alexandra chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
oh..my...god. whew! hot damn chica...you are REALLY good at writing bella/edward sex scenes. never stop writing them! lol...what can i say..i'm sad that stephenie didn't have any...so if you're able to do it so well, i LOVE to read it. and you also encompass their love during the passionate scenes.
this story, like your others, is very well-written. thank you for sharing your amazing talent! and i love this story as a one-shot thing. oh, and also...i LOVE the time they spend with renesmee in the beginning. reading that was actually the first time i could feel the parental love for a child that bella and edward must have for renesmee. i didn't get that feeling from breaking dawn for some reason...and i havent' seen it in other fanfics. just the sense of watching your child...a piece of you and your husband...someone you are so proud of and love so much..you expressed that feeling very well. thank you!
| goldeneyes1918 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
the tire swing was a very cute idea
| fangbang chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I loved this one shot because not only did it give us a glimpse at some of their family time but it gave us Bella/Edward romance which is something that is sometimes severely lacking cough breaking dawn cough ;o). Oh and I get ya on the tire spelling - I didn't even realise that americans spelt it different!
| averysubtlegift chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I haven't read many stories with Renesmee - but I loved the sweetness of this one. I always believe you really write on of the best "true" Edward's (and Bella as well) so this feels really true, authentic. Even the bit at the end - I felt carried away by their passion, but not dirty.
I think the idea is lovely, and I liked seeing both sides of Edward - as a father and as a husband to Bella
| churroettes94 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
ohh loved this one shot
| lovebuggkiss chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
This was a really good one-shot.
And not only for the ExB-ness of it.
I really like how you have the ExBRenesmee relationship.
It's the only fic so far that I actually like how Renesmee is portrayed as the 'child' she is. Most, mainly skip to her 'grown', adult/teen, years. The normalcy of their family relationship is great.
You should really do a story, with them as a family, early on, after BD. :)
anyway, good fic.
| FrogKaos chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Simply delicious. Excellent one shot. :D
| BellaMarie1234 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
I thought that your story was well writen and very original ... You got my attention I'm always on the look out for a good Edward and bella story so ill keep and eye out if you write any more ! Thanks
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
| former.trackstar chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
and Renesmee was so cute!
| hpdude-4life chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
yh i liked the story!
the whole bit with renesmee was cute aswell.
aww i luv that girl!
but bac 2 the serious business.
well i think it ROCKED.
| Carlisle060 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
that is hot :)