Reviews for We Were Written
Bubbles of Colours chapter 12 . 3/15
I liked this ending. Even if I would have loved to read every tiny piece of their lives together, this was sweeter and more suited to the tone of the story.

Loove xx
Chica de Ipanema chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
I feel like this story had so much potential and I wish you would have gotten into a little more detail on some parts. I still enjoyed it thou but I would love to have read a bit more about the war and the time Sakura was away lost at Japan and being a geisha again to survive and all that she had to go through. Just my opinion of course. Nice job either way :)
TheLadyBurgundy chapter 12 . 9/22/2014
Ackkkkk! Love the plot. 3
Guest chapter 12 . 2/22/2014
SOOO VERY SWEET! GLAD FOR THE HAPPY ENDING!
mrs. zala chapter 12 . 2/1/2014
yes. too bad, you didn't show the reunion between father, brother and sister.
BUT! i'm soooo agree with this ending.
it is much better than long-live-happy-ending that i had thought.
even so, if i have other route, i wanna see them getting old and seeing their grandchildren (which is my own version of ending)..
how beautiful it would be.

this story was short. but i have to admit that this becoming one of my favorite fanfict stories.
even with short storyline, you use it very well.. so this story leave a long lasting impression in my mind.
maybe you already found out that that i'm romantic by heart (based on my review).
even if not, i already tell you now. hahaha.

oya! I LOVE the way you give title for each chapter. sooo touching, i admit it.
my most favorite one? "If Love is A Dance, I Have To Rehearse"
that's sooooo touching *melting*
hahaha.

you know what? i hope i will met someone like syaoran.. who's confident to be with his destinied love..
and like sakura... who's so brave and trusting to the man she loved...
well, like i said before..
'people tended to believe in the best of things', right?

in short, i really enjoy reading this story.
YOU ARE GREAT!
i'm looking forward to read your other story

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 11 . 2/1/2014
what? what?
how can she?
wow!
i can't wait to see the ending!

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 10 . 2/1/2014
you know what?
of all parts in this story, beside their first night...
their letters also become one of my favorites!
gosh... PET NAMES? AWWWWWW
i almost rolling around just because of giddiness.
ohohooo.
i love that.

until next time

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 9 . 2/1/2014
whaaaaaaaat?
unexpected meeting with sakura's brother!
very well done!
what will happened next?

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
oh my god!
they successfully convincing the family to get married!
CONGRATULATION!
and... i love the way yelan think in this chapter.
especially when she admit that her husband and her son are fools.. and she was the foolest of them all.
of course... for "loving this two fools". *grin*

just great. he gone to war?
why?

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
that was.. terrible news!
it's not about the child, but the time where the child was conceived.
gosh... why at this time? when it was at war?
*sigh*
but still... congratulation for them.
i hope they will always be safe.
anyway, did i ever mention that you have a wonderful style of writing?
if not, now i say it. haha.

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
maybe you wandering i didn't review previous chapter. but that's because it was a bliss.
so i won't disturb that feeling.
but now.. when the chaos comes, i need to.
i wonder what kind of persuasion from china's government once they know that syaoran refused to make their weapon because of his love towards one japanese woman.
*shivering*

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
...

*too busy to crying so i will review this shortly*

...

yup. another completion. now, what things fate already prepared for the next?
i wonder if i can see tomoyo again...
and eriol of course...

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
*sigh*
now, this is one of nightmare that i've been predicted.
*sigh*
poor sakura.. and i feel a bit condolences for all geishas.
-.-"

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 2 . 2/1/2014
this is sooooooooooooo ROMANTIC
i'm melting here
i know i was a bit old (i'm still in twenties, you know) to believe something innocent yet cheesy love like this.. but i can't help! everyone always wants to believe the best of things, right?
awwww..

i wonder if his father was sick or something...
i hope so. not because of murdered.
anyway, it's time for the obligation befall to syaoran.
fufufufu.

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
nice opening. really.
cute but romantic (for a child).
they just soo innocent... didn't care what the future like.
i'm starting to imagine where this story leads to.
i wonder if i can predict your story. hehe.

until next time,

mrs. zala
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