|Reviews for Bleed It Out|
| Free Siri chapter 11 . 1/3
I wasn't exactly expecting that...
| Free Siri chapter 7 . 1/3
Canon tells me Harry held a dead Cedric, so that's a. Possibility. But then there's also Ron and Hermione, which he hasn't mentioned, so something happened to them too.
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
I just found this story but really enjoyed it :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/31/2013
Seriously 4th chapter? Is this just about lust?
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
Ignoring a few of my pet peeves that you've hit so far, I found most of this chapter unnecessary. You didn't need to go through all their points of view especially as you just reiterated everything in Edward's. If you wanted to show their thoughts you just need his part.
| AMarieKelley chapter 13 . 12/30/2012
Aww I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/13/2012
Not a bad story.
I hope to see more of your work one day.
| Snarry Potter chapter 13 . 6/3/2012
this was a great story thank you for such a lovely story
| Gracealma chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
I like the fact that Edward and Harry like each other right away. In addition to that, the cullens need to see that Severus and Harry are more than they appear to be. Rosie needs to change her act. Good character development.
| Gracealma chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I'm new to Fanfiction. Came upon your site today. Like the idea of Snape being Harry's father. And using the world of Twilight.
| Potter Chief 16 chapter 13 . 12/21/2011
hey, i loved this story i know u said sme eleents could stop u rom writing ore on it, but i still think it would be an amazing story to continue if u could...
| Calliech28 chapter 13 . 8/30/2011
It's very well written and I enjoyed it very much. The only thing I would change about your stories is to make the interactions between parents and children (that actually like each other) warmer.
| Venus914 chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
| Lena204 chapter 13 . 7/25/2011
I just got done reading this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the part of where it was obvious Harry had to warm up to Edward and not just jump into instant liking of him.
I would say I saw severely grammar, spelling, and sentence errors that you might want to get a beta to look over.
I was expecting more out of this story, maybe Bella actually coming in or the Volutri or something/one from the magical world. Just more than Harry and Severus meeting the Cullens and Harry falling in love with Edward.
| purefaith91 chapter 13 . 7/15/2011
Very good and I agree that this is where you should have ended your story. If SS had not been so determined to have Harry as his son, things could have turned out much different. I love your SS. Very good read. Thanks for sharing. p