|Reviews for Her Misery|
| No Longer in Operation chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
sort of a cutedark story
| Crystalline chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Fantastic, thank you!
| anneryn7 chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
This is amazing. I love this! :)
| son-of-puji chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
Agh, he is an asshole. I would have handcuffed HIM to the bed and not let him go XD
| LilyMT-chan chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
Haha I really liked this story. Jack is really hott!
| frlarsson chapter 2 . 6/23/2010
Loved this chapter, too )
best wishes, Linda
| frlarsson chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Loved the first chapter, its smokin hot, )
best wishes, Linda
| NicolinaN chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
Oh dear God, Cami! You write sex scenes like a Goddess! What are you talking about?
I am so glad that he said he’d come back! I was pretty sure that he wouldn’t. That’ he’d just leave her with her emotions on her sleeve. But maybe you’re like me? Wanting them to be together, even though they can’t. I liked this a lot!
| the little spanko chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
It is well written. I am concerned with how close to rape this is, only turning from it at the very last moment. Is there a reason for this? Rapists use that reasoning a lot in real life, actually, and living through it isn't sexy or alluring. I did like Lisa gaining some control half way through the sex scene. It'd be nice if you did an update where she turns the table on him to at least sort of even the score.
| matildav chapter 2 . 5/11/2010
Wow very hot
| adelusion1 chapter 2 . 4/22/2010
I have no damn clue why I haven't reviewed this story. This was actually the first one I read from you...
Brain Damage. Ha. I'm such a klutz.
Anyways, I'll tell you know. I found it four or five months ago, and was pretty much...jeez, I can't find a word that fits correctly... dazzled? amazed? gripping the edge of my seat?
This is by far the best -after- the Red Eye kinda one-shot-fic-let's-do-this-for-fun-just-for-the-hell-of-it.
The characters are so well build and not at all shallow like some "one-night-stand" fics from Red Eye. Obviously not one-night-stand... I mean, pshh, I'd love if you continued with it. *nervous laugh* Okay, I'm just amazed by the chemistry, the sexual tension that's almost palpable. It sets in perfectly, not too slow, not too fast. It's perfect.
Wow! Big review! Sorry!
..."I'm rough, Lisa," he snapped like it was obvious, his face still hovering mere inches from her bare breasts. "What did you expect – Me to be all gentle and tender with you? You should know better than that."
...Guilty. I just had to threw that in here, because I nearly passed out because of it. This is for the win. (;
Again, I would love for you to continue it, but if you decide to leave it there, that's fine. It's perfect either way! :D
| dancing-badly chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
that was unpleasant and I didn't actually finish reading it. You are a skilled writer, that is quite obvious. You paint a scene beautifully. My problem was with content. This story bordered so closely to rape that it made me uncomfortable. Lisa says no repeatedly and yet he continues. When he claims he isn't a rapist and that she really wants this and is just being difficult, that is actually a reasoning used by rapists in an overwhelming amount of cases. Regardless of us the reader knowing Lisa wants it and that in the end she is a consenting participant, it was really close to a rape story...and that made me uncomfortable. And a little ooc (as you said lol), cause I like to think Jackson wouldn't do that.
But you are a very talented writer and I'm looking forward to reading other pieces by you. I'm actually going to go read that 21 chapter saga or yours.
| GlassEmotions chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
So, this story was incredibly hot. Just thought you should know. XD
| Jaded Rukia chapter 2 . 11/30/2009
Love it. Well-written smut. What more can I ask for? J/K. :P But really, there's smut out there that's horribly written, and it just comes off more funny than sexy. THIS is sexy. :)
| Misty Day chapter 2 . 11/20/2009
This is an excellent story. I enjoyed every word. You really should write a sequel to this if you haven't already!