|Reviews for Some Sacred Place|
| Yueaifeng chapter 21 . 7/28
Wow, alright, this is coming years and years too late. I first read this fic way back in 2010, and somehow missed when there were updates and ye. No idea if you'll see this, but hey.
So this is definitely my favourite DGM fanwork ever, and possibly one of my favourite fanfiction of all time. You really built your story beautifully, letting the characters grow into their relationships naturally and realistically. From the first chapter, you really captivated my attention, back when I first read it and today, when I read through it completely again. You have a way of capturing the characters' essence, and then depicting them in your story. Tyki, Lavi, Kanda, Allen... even Road and Sheryl were written in such a respectful and true way that I couldn't help but love what you did with every single one of them (actually, one of things I'm most sad about is not getting to see more Road and Lavi being 'friends' because they were so cute at breakfast-at-Sheryl's hehe). You're really good at dialogue, too. Each character sounded just like their originals, so I'm just kind of squeeing in the corner haha don't mind me.
You did a lovely job with pacing, too. Nothing felt rushed, and nothing dragged on. Everything flowed naturally, from one scene to the next. Not to mention, your writing is just beautiful in general, ahhh. Your descriptions are beautifully vivid. Honestly, I was so happy when Lavi chose Tyki, and that you could tell he was really struggling with the choice, struggling between what he remembers and what he wants (and I'm so biassed for Lucky oops). I absolutely love how you included the Noah family, and that you brought in Lenalee, and just touched on everyone who's important to Lavi and Tyki. So many story sideline anyone other than the main pairing, so I was just so happy to have everyone take part and effect the story.
And I especially love watching Tyki and Lavi stumble in their relationship. I love watching it grow and be nurtured by those two dorks, love watching as they struggle and then succeed and come out on top together, despite everything. I love how Allen and Kanda are working around how they feel, and how they're learning to rely on one another bit by bit.
It's been five years since you last updated, so I doubt you'll be continuing the story. But thank you for everything you've published and for sharing your beautiful story with the world. Thank you for making me a really happy eighth grader fumbling into fanfiction and a happy nineteen-year-old coming back to DGM. Thank you for this amazing work you've no doubt poured yourself into. And I hope, wherever you are, you're doing well and that you're happy, every day of your life. 3
| EarlySummer4 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This is one of my fav story ever! Everything's beautiful. The plot, the beautiful writting, the character, the pairings ( my OTP is Yullen and Lucky xD )
I'm really glad that Kanda and Allen are getting somewhere but kinda worry for Tyki and Lavi.
Please update soon because I'm dying here TT_TT
| snowwulfx chapter 21 . 6/3/2013
Update soon! This is one of my favorite stories ever! You're a really, really good writer. Really beautiful story
| AkatsukiSinx666 chapter 21 . 10/26/2012
It's been quite a long time since you updated but I wanted to tell you that I still love this fic so much!
It has been one of the first fics to get me onboard the Lucky ship so I really hope you are continuing this
| GiGi chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Please update! I NEED to know the end of this story!
| snowwulfx chapter 21 . 6/16/2012
Love this story! Please update soon!
| MissOnyx chapter 21 . 6/6/2012
This story has to be one if the most in depth, stunning,heart wrenching story I've ever read. Put the characters various personalities and different complexity of their emotions, you have a truly realistic breath taking piece. I love how you showed the good in Tyki, the darkness in Lavi, the emotion in Kanda, and the jealousy in Allen. Please do not leave this as an abandoned piece. Thank you
| IC Bwe chapter 21 . 3/7/2012
This is honestly one of my favourite did such a great job with it (:
I love that you explored Lavi's own darkness a tad because honestly we all know they arent perfect. Lenalee's reaction was a bit OC but thats just my opinion of course. Great character development and plot. Can't wait for the last chapter because this had better not be the end. ;3
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 21 . 1/12/2012
Well, this is absolutely beautiful. It's a shame it isn't done, but that doesn't make it any less wonderful. Lucky makes me happier than I'd like to admit. And I'm glad that Allen and Kanda are getting somewhere, at least. It makes me hopeful, at the very least. Ahh, I'm slightly worried for Tyki though- what might happen to him for giving out that information. And I really love you for choosing Spain as the location of this standoff- for many reasons I don't think I'll go into at the moment. Regardless, I think it's the perfect place, and that makes me really happy.
All your stories are so long, it was somewhat daunting to start. Because when I start reading something, I kind of commit to finishing it (if it's not horrible enough to leave me gagging, which this OBVIOUSLY isn't), and to be reading all that during finals week... well, I couldn't help myself with this one. Maybe at some point I'll get to the other Lucky-inclusive fic (not that I don't appreciate other couples, but my current mood has been leaning toward Lucky for a while and I don't think it's going to change anytime soon), but... Well, no doubt I will at some point get to the other Lucky-inclusive fic. It just depends on WHEN I get to it.
Thanks so much for writing! I hope you haven't completely given up on finishing it, but I can't really condemn you if you have. ; Either way, I had fun reading it, so it was definitely not a wasted effort.
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 21 . 9/30/2011
Well! I must say that you're a very good writer, and I'm glad to have found this story of yours. I've enjoyed it so far, even if I was a bit shocked at Lavi's decision which he still doesn't seem comfortable with. And poor Kanda is handling things as well as he can...
I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you take the story from here! I smell a confrontation over the Ark. :)
| Uniasus chapter 21 . 9/24/2011
Gah, I love this. You mix smut with something much more powerful, the deep emotions of hunamkind, and gives everything a heavy feel, a ring of truth and honesty. I can't help but admire your craft for doing that, and can't wait to see this updated, and get started on your other stories.
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Wow, what a concept- I like this idea and am looking forward to enjoying the rest of the fic :)
| AnimeCrazed121 chapter 21 . 9/13/2011
WOW...THAT MUST HAVE BEEN SO EFFING AKWARD...hmm idk how I feel about Allen and Kandas relationship in this story...and THAT is kinda scary because Yullen is my favorite yaoi pairing ever...
Im kinda upset because Kanda doesn't love Allen...he loves Lavi.
its pretty obvious...but i still cant be too sure. This story's depth is really amazing, the complexity and detailed outlook on the characters is breathtaking, the way Tyki and Lavi struggle with an unstable conflicting relationship and how the two sides clash around them, it amazes me how you almost get in their heads and create a perfect story from their different personalities and points of view. even though I love Yullen its hard to say anything bad about something so impressive. Im really glad to have found such an awesome story!
| KIS'E'productions chapter 21 . 9/12/2011
The chapter title really suits the no going plot of this chapter. It's really killing time I must say. Or something. What am I saying again? Haha, oh right. Despite the dubbed Killing Loneliness, lots of things happen, Allen and Kanda finally hit it off, Kanda trying to find more in their little set-up then Allen wants...and Allen being Allen. Yullen makes a fine pairing in this chapter, because they both are lonely. Lucky isn't doing so well, I fear mistakes in the near future.
The descriptions on Kanda's part are beautiful I must say.
| Mello-The-Melon chapter 20 . 5/2/2011
Ahhh my god it is BEAUTIFUL! -melts-
As soon as i was on the last part my mother came in and started pottering about, making a racket XD I was like; 'Noo shut up, i have been following this for a while now and i would quite like to read the end of the latest chapter in peace thank you very much!' XP
Ahh i love it! Yaaay, Lavi and Tyki are together, i'm so happy!
Please update when you can! 333
A very BIG welldone xxxxx