Reviews for Hidden Plot
phantom fan chapter 18 . 3/10/2014
the stories good so far...
but you need to put a part about who the boss is,. (I'm guessing its Ryan)
please update it A.S.A.P otherwise I'll die of not knowing the ending!
horselovr2000 chapter 18 . 1/4/2014
Update
please
SmokesGurl20 chapter 18 . 7/8/2013
Cute story. I hope you finish it!
Katrina the Unicorn chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
I like your tory and I wonder if there is more I read all 18 and wonder what is next.
Athena Silverwolf chapter 17 . 7/14/2012
i liked this story so much i favorited it so i can always find it and read it when i want :)
Athena Silverwolf chapter 18 . 7/10/2012
i really enjoyed reading this story. i think Ryan and Rachel should come back in, and that Ryan was the "Boss" they were talking about.
trappinismygame chapter 18 . 11/3/2011
I absolutely love it! Please write some more! I want to know what happens between Sam and Jake! And Jen and Darrel! was what happened to Sam part of Rachels threat or does more happen to Sam? I would love more of this story!
Wild Cowgirl 16 chapter 18 . 1/9/2011
Awsome chapter!
DarkSunshine24 chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
aww good job ud soon!
horselover65 chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
Love it!
AceTrace chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
Me wants more
JakeAndJoy chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
update !
DarkSunshine24 chapter 17 . 12/30/2010
awwww loveydovey jake thats so cute
horselover65 chapter 17 . 12/16/2010
Love it please update soon. This chapter was so cute!
AceTrace chapter 17 . 12/15/2010
Awwww poor sam!
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