Reviews for Third Person Limited
Newbie chapter 1 . 8/15/2009

My favorite threesome!Or similar to a

Anyways, I LOVED IT!

Could you write a actual threesome with them?

And good luck with your other stories, bye!

signed, Newbie
Keira-93 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
As a twin this was a little creepy, but I loved it all the same, expecially the end.
CottonCandyHaze chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Simply fantastic The thought never occurred to me but..still.. Bravo.

Funny too, but then, I'm weird like that

But then.. As long as it has Sora and Roxas together with Roxy being the seme, I could care less what the fudge Riku or anyone else does
Lyn chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
This absolutely demands a sequel.
KnightlyLady chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Um. That was epic. Don't like Roxas/Sora. But. Wow. Haha. And Riku at the end? Classic - I love your writing style, and I'm so happy you have more stories. I shall read them all very soon :D
sophiii chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
DUDE LIKE WOAH. Hot much? *nervous laugh* Right. I'm going to find a meaning for this review. Really. Okay I seriously just sat here for about 10 minutes. This is a pointless review, because I am speachless. Well maybe not, because here I am ranting away. *nervous laugh vol II* I _really_ like your writings. Is that a word? I like this ficcie (I'm quite enthusiastic about making up words today) very much. I'm going to add it to my favourites, and tell my friend to read it. I was talking about this to her yesterday, about how I read half of it like weks ago but never got to the end of it, and about how I was going to finish reading it one of these days, and she sounded vair vair vair excited. I shall report to her and tell her that it's quality HOT PORNY BOYSEX. She'll love it, I know it. If she doesn't, I'll have to befriend her. Yup.
Tekko chapter 1 . 4/18/2009

me stalker.


Cheshire chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Fuck, I love you. That was way too hot for me to be reading when I need to get to school in 15 minutes.

So yeah. Kudos.
Jellybeans-steh chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
You only live once,man...SO ENJOY HOT MENAGE! Sora and Roxas are meean ...And Riku is a damn pervert! How dare he lok at others *... , well-written and enjoyed it a lot...And the last frase is my new phylosophy for life!


Mord Sith Matt chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
*eyes wide* This story was really hot! I like it!
SeyoukaiStar chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Oh how I wish you kept going :( I prolly would've came without even touching myself... lol, jk XD

Very nice one-shot ] It was YUMMEH
Axel-Seme chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
VEry nicely done. I'm surprised I liked this actually, since I don't really like Sora/Roxas, but you kept me reading! I loved it. XD
Hysteri chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
-_-. I can't believe how amazingly hot that was, regardless of incest. gah. you are godly -goes to make a shrine-

i never liked incest, but this is definiantly amazing.

haha and the last line? EPIC.
Kilito chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
zomg that was amazing.

why has this not got more reviews?

dude, twincest is totally best.

your an amazing writer and i love all your work.

keep it up.
andhearts chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
OH MY GAH! holy... OH MY GAH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE ME READ THIS! Dang it! I started reading, and I KNEW what was going to happen, BUT I COULDN'T STOP! I COULDN'T! I swear I tried, BUT I COULDN'T. I DON'T EVEN LIKE SMUT! I don't even like INCEST unless its Chris and Cathy! *starts muttering to herself rocking back and forth* Oh my gah. Man. That was, regaurdless of the twin thing, HOT. oh mah gah. XD You've done what no author has done to me since Flowers in the Attic and Petals on the Wind! You're right there with V.C. Andrews now! Oh man... Dang it! I didn't want to like it but I do! I DO! *cries*

lmao. I crack myself up. But, really, I was yelling at myself the entire time I was reading this. If anyone heard me they would probably think I was completely insane! But, this was wonderful, and for me to like it even when its incest AND smut! You've GOT to be good. :D Go you!

And I hope you're friend gets her a job (if she wants another) I'm sorry to hear that she was fired. I'm trying to find a job myself. Sigh.

Oh, and the first part of the review was not suppose to be an insult, it was just a part of my brain shutting down, because I liked this so much. lol. Keep up the good work! :D
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