Reviews for The Fallen
princessebee chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
I was never a fan of Aubretia's work with the high-drama incest, non-con, alcoholism, brain damage, etc and her characterisation didn't really work for me either... not to say she wasn't/isn't an excellent writer, her particular take just never appealed to me so I was hesitant to read this fic until I saw it was just a drabble...

I think it works. It's sad and strange and a little unsettling. It's too short to really critique on style and content but the economy of words used to convey a very-much-felt atmosphere is a great skill.
Raphs No.1 Girl chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Wow - I'd never have thought such a short piece of writing could be so powerful!

Well done!

:D
Nineteenth Souljah chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
You're one of the writers I find truly inspirational.

How you've written Raph's outlook in life (and death)...it just makes me want to hug the guy for some reason.

Beautiful as always.
tFantasyFan chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh this was wonderful. Short and bittersweet. Incredibly well-done
Pink Cloud Assembly chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
I can never make short things like this work, but you pulled it off magnificently.