|Reviews for Once Upon a Time|
| bundleb chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
ROMANTIC. WHO WAS BELLA HUSBAND
| Leah C. Drawn chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
This was amazing and sweet. Who was Bella's husband? And in the end... she does stay with Edward, doesn't she? Anyways, amazing :D
| Safaia Bara chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever read a love scene that was so sweet and tender, it truly was like a fairytale.
I know you put this story down as "complete", but I think you could go a lot further with it. I'll put it on Alert just in case.
| coryoplayer chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
| Lady Elle of the Night chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Aww I loved it!
You should definately write more.
The story was very original and it made me cry!
Keep up the amazing work!
| MIKIWARD chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
best lemon ever
i like how there is a story behind it aswell
| coolness chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
this story is flippin'awsome!
i actually felt like i was there,you are a great writer
| moosetash chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
aw. this was impossibly sweet and damned hot katie! i loved the ending with juliet :) x
| Shante17 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
That was really good!
| Kaiddles chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh my goodness!
I loved your story, this was so sweet, and so passionate, Edward was charming.
I think the ending was a bit rushed, but I loved the daughter's name and how you ended it with "Once upon a time.."
| Blue-Winter-Angel chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Absolutely fantastic! You wrote it so well, it had that fairy tale edge to it. You really feel for Bella in this story. So WELL DONE! Brilliantly written. You're a very talented writer. :)
| BelleinWonderland chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh that was beautiful!:]I trully loved it!I hope you write a sequel and call it "HAPPILY EVER AFTER"?I would love to read about Bella starting out her life again with Edward & her I wonder if Edward has a child of his own or was possibly in another relationship that did'nt turn out right?Either way this was wonderful to read & I'm so happy you wrote it!:]Please think about doing a sequel,I would love & read it!Thank you.
| MurderedLove chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
you should definately make this a full story, and tell us hwat happened after-words?
| oldsoul1964 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
That made me cry, It was very moving.
| kookydow818 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh gosh i love this story! Please please please please please continue it soon!